Comment from jim lawler

Excellent

Nice reading Terza I got a comforting mental picture as I read on. You paint a beautiful picture and make one give thought to what lies beyond this part of life! Good luck keep it up. Jim Lawler

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014

Thank you for the kind words. There is nothing nicer than hearing that the words paint a picture and give the reader something to think about. I appreciate the encouragement.

Comment from Ranwolf

Excellent

Your poem leads us all to a very true point. The day is coming when we all have that wonderful chance to live in paradise. You have written your poem very well. It brings a light to the heart and soul. Thank you.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014

Thank you for the kind comments and your insightful comments. I appreciate the encouragement.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

strong rhymes in excellent chain rhyme pattern of the terza rima, including the closing couplet
frolic/snuggle - good verb choices to add life and personality to the scene
lovely descriptive detail with a gentle tone that conveys a thoughtful spiritual message
Brooke

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 Comment Written 02-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014

Thank you, Brooke. I appreciate the kind comments and encouragement.