Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Teresa, it doesn't need a picture...you can feel your every word...the belief in God's gifts to us...our minds , Our bodies , and our souls...a wonderful poem...so very nicely written...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014

Thank you Linda:)

reply by l.raven on 02-Sep-2014

so welcome Teresa...xxoo

Comment from Tonulak

Excellent

Hi Teresa,
At least you didn't step in anything unpleasant this time;) Forgive the jest:)
This poem was like seeing through the inner eye and letting it guide you. Very nicely done--Ted

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014

lol! Yes, a bit different from the last poem:) Thanks Ted for the great review:)

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

It is important to take the time, settle into natures and silence and be mindful if even the trivial miracles of creation. It restores the soul. This lightly flowing poem describes those movements

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014

Thank you:)

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Teresa,

Wow, this is another great poem about God and His glorious gifts. You did a topnotch job in writing it. I enjoyed every word of it.

Kat

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014

thank you Kat:)

Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

Ah, art work is not necessary as your
words paint this beautifully serene
mural of inner peace where one can
hear, feel all of nature's beauty caress
their very soul.
Well done

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014

Thank you so much:)

Comment from tbacha58

Exceptional

I float
as one
with clouds
through endless skies

I bask
in all
God's glorious gifts
allowing
peace and loving kindness
to permeate
my body
my mind
my soul

Oh wow T. I am so relieved reading your deep feelings , your deep content, your happiness without feeling any guilt. Wow T. I feel so good
knowing at last your poems, are so positive, you do serve that since a long time. But I am glad Jesus stood next to you, to help you feel this beautiful content in your everyday life. Love u Terry xoxo

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014

Thank you Terry for the gift of all the stars. I try to remain positive and peaceful but sometimes the pain creeps back in. Love you. T

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

Lovely alliterative and descriptive words to express your feelings of being at one with Nature. Well chosen words and imagery and a most enjoyable read. Faye

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014

Thank you Faye:)

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Fade away, fade away, into the atmosphere of God. Leaning into His rest is something to accomplish. Excellent poem. Shalom . Blessings

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014

thanks Ben:)

Comment from Connie C

Exceptional

Yes, you definitely don't need any artwork with this little masterpiece of yours that provides all the imagery we need. What a beautiful description of finding peace and solitude with nature.
Very nice!
Connie

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014

Thank you Connie for honoring my poem with all the stars:)

Comment from rmj09

Excellent

This is a well written poem under the genre of spiritual.
The emotions I felt were interest and joy.
The mental picture I formed was the sweet message our Lord sent through the trees. While floating lazily above in a baby blue sky, I watch the beauty pass below.
Keep on writing and bringing joy.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014

Thanks for the great review - I like the image that it put in your head:)