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The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go

Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "One thing after another."
Subtitle: God Never Lets Go!

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Comment from c_lucas
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For my problem with sleep disorder I was unable to wear the mask very long. I kept suffocating. At the moment, I am going through the eye problem. Diabetes is still down the road. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

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 Comment Written 10-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014
    hope you don't mind the cut and paste dear friend....Thanks I have reorganized stuff you could very well have read some of this before but a reviewer also a friend suggested moving stuff around in sequence which I have now done for medical stuff and pets and a couple of other things. nearly finished. Thanks again. Stick around.
reply by c_lucas on 10-Jul-2014
    You're welcome, Geoff. Charlie
Comment from CR Delport
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That eye injections does sound really scary. I think I would mess myself if they had to do that to me. Quite an interesting story that makes for a good read.

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 Comment Written 10-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014
    Thanks friend yeah as I said it was a lot worse when I went in again and KNEWE WHAT TO EXPECT! This is a re do of my medical stuff one of you great reviewers suggested breaking up all my medical stuff and I have interwoven it throughout the story, now ansd same with the pet chapter. Putting most in the time frame of when it really happened. Just one more chapter and I will be done before the big edit. Thanks very much for coming by.