Where Lands The Albatross
Who are those that may be geniuses, yet damnedmed .32 total reviews
Comment from Nosha17
What a sad life in the end for someone with so much potential. You have described him very well with intricate detail. Your narrative flowed well and it was written with such sincerity. I agree with you about how people are cast out, like you said, like lepers and then the downward spiral begins. Well written story. Faye
reply by the author on 16-May-2014
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What a sad life in the end for someone with so much potential. You have described him very well with intricate detail. Your narrative flowed well and it was written with such sincerity. I agree with you about how people are cast out, like you said, like lepers and then the downward spiral begins. Well written story. Faye
Comment Written 16-May-2014
reply by the author on 16-May-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Righteous Riter
This piece starts off is such a way that it grabs my attention and sparks my interest. By the description and using the "He". I like the transition in this piece. I like the description. I like the pace as the conclusion makes me want to read more.
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reply by the author on 16-May-2014
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This piece starts off is such a way that it grabs my attention and sparks my interest. By the description and using the "He". I like the transition in this piece. I like the description. I like the pace as the conclusion makes me want to read more.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-May-2014
reply by the author on 16-May-2014
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Thank you