Comment from Winslow

Excellent

Dear Jumbo,

Those pheromones will get you every time. For the forbidden fruit is on display and if we partake we pay the price thus say Adam to his darling Eve.

Warm regards,

Winslow

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014

Hi Winslow,
quite possibly true, restraint may be needed to keep the equilibrium, but hey a boy can dream can't he?
Thanks for the fine review, most appreciated.

With our thoughts we create,
a moral compass,
James

Comment from JonnyRhymes

Excellent

This is a strong and passionate poem which describes sexual desire for a seemingly unattainable woman. You convey your feelings well and i think most men will relate to this.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014

Hi Jonny R,
thanks for the cracking review... everything is attainable, just gotta believe... smile.

With our thoughts we create,
a perfect outcome,
James

Comment from NicciFaye

Excellent

Bite bite bite!!! Beautiful James..and Lovely in context and presentation. That forbidden fruit can be a bit to go over heels for. I love the introduction of this poem.

That is a powerful thought..I think about how powerful a lighting strike is...and to strikes one's heart is to ZAPP and SHOCK it with greatness of LOVE. The you mellow out this powerful thought with ...feel you heart, if only just once...brilliant beautiful!

It's felt...NF

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014

Hi Nicci,
of course it's been a long time since I partook in any biting of that delightful forbidden fruit... I have perfectly good eating fruit at home.

Thank you for your wonderful review, I hold your comments in the highest regard.

With our thoughts we create,
irregular heart flutters,
James xx

reply by NicciFaye on 28-Mar-2014

Lol... You know I laughed so hard when I read this and I know your wife is absolutely happy!

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is a well written nonet for the contest. It has the perfect line and syllable count. Good luck to you in the contest.
Teresa

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014

Hi Teresa,
thank you for your kind and encouraging review, most appreciated.

With our thoughts we create,
conscious thought,
James xx

Comment from ennahanid

Excellent

A virtual 6 as I regret I have none left. I love this Nonet of yours and wish you luck in the contest. Forbidden fruit certainly taste so sweet but then...

How bitter the taste of
Stolen fruits,
When you are discovered
In your acts of coveting
And pillaging.

Do you really want to take such a chance LOL

Loved this and again sorry no 6 left - Dinah

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014

Hi Dinah,
how right you are... stolen fruit... probably picked at the wrong time... not ripe. But I can equivocally say there was no pillaging involved... well at least to my knowledge.

And no I would never take such a chance... true love is not found by lustful impulses, or is it?.. Smile.

Thank you so much for your wonderfully encouraging review and virtual six, all of which is totally appreciated.

With our thoughts we create,
the right choices,
James xx

Comment from Charlene0513

Excellent

To Jumbo J
An allusion you have created to saturate your inner feelings of loneliness.
Forbidden fruit-alliteration used
Charlene

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014

Hi Charlene,
an interesting observation... an allusion of loneliness or just an animalistic male urge? Or for that matter a female urge?

But no need to worry, there only words with no weight behind them, just tainted fruit.

Thank you for the, well lets say curious review... most appreciated.

With our thoughts we create,
the perfect allusion,
James xx

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Wow, hot stuff here! You really know how to say the things that make a girl go weak in the knees lol. I envy the woman you write about. Very nice nonet entry. I wish you well in this contest.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014

Hi Joy,
thank you so much for your wonderful and encouraging review... most appreciated... smile.

With our thoughts we create,
a perfect vision,
James xx

Comment from Showboat

Excellent

Hi Jumbo,

I really liked that one. It's amazing how physical attraction can overcome us like that, and yet the recipient is so often wrong for us in every other way. Just not fair, lol.

Great one, all the best luck,
Gayle

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014

Hi Gayle,
I'm blaming the pheromones... even though my hound-dogging days have long since finished... but what I can say is thirty years later these feelings I first had, landed me my life-long partner and best friend... so I guess it's just picking the right piece of fruit?

Thank you for your wonderful review and your well wishes... most appreciated.

With our thoughts we create,
conscious choice,
James xx

Comment from Aletheia

Excellent

"You cause lightning strikes inside my heart"

Wow! Talk about passion! That's an awesome line. I like the slant rhyme of sweet/weak. This is superb. I wish I had a six left. Love it!

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014

Hi Begonia,
what a sweet-smelling and pretty name. Thank you for your wonderful review and your kind wishes... all is taken with an appreciative smile... have a great weekend.

With our thoughts we create,
erratic heartbeats,
James

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear James - this is a sassy post with building heat - great word choices and overall hit of the lusting moment....no matter what "it" is you delivered it well in the well penned nonet. Great imagery and emotion.
Great job and good luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014

Hi Maureen,
thank you for your wonderfully encouraging words. I don't think there was an 'it' involved in creating this, just a line... then another one and so on... I'm a bit boring like that... smile.

How are you doing sweet lady?

Thanks for the well wishes... I need more than luck though... big smile.

Love, light and healing,
James vx's

reply by Maureen's Pen on 28-Mar-2014

I'm keeping my bootstraps buckled and hanging on for the ride:)
xx