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Comment from nomi338
Yes, we walk by faith and not by sight. I cannot begin to tell you how many times I have been deceived by things I saw, but rarely by things that I believed in my heart
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014
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Yes, we walk by faith and not by sight. I cannot begin to tell you how many times I have been deceived by things I saw, but rarely by things that I believed in my heart
Comment Written 21-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014
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totally! thanx nomi :-)
Comment from Pili Pubul
Just perfect definition of faith my friend.
Very clever written in an excellent style.
Few words well chosen to make a point.
Good luck in the contest. Is terrific. Pili
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014
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Just perfect definition of faith my friend.
Very clever written in an excellent style.
Few words well chosen to make a point.
Good luck in the contest. Is terrific. Pili
Comment Written 21-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014
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thank you pili :-)
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You are so welcome. :---)
Comment from barleygirl
I do NOT follow your blathering about faith & clarity & poetic forms at the top of this page (read it a few times). I'm not sure if all your clarification is clarifying anything.
That being said, the message in your poem is so crucial to the understanding of faith, I'm amazed it's rarely addressed in faith writings. I just re-learned how to walk for the first time in 5 years & the effort took me 10 grueling months of physical therapy, after neck surgery. The faith I felt the whole time can only be described as in your poem, which conveys it perfectly. There was NOTHING to indicate my legs would ever work again, period.
I love that you didn't resort to the tired old line: "live by faith, not by sight" even tho it's sacred & true.
This is a great concept, well executed. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014
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I do NOT follow your blathering about faith & clarity & poetic forms at the top of this page (read it a few times). I'm not sure if all your clarification is clarifying anything.
That being said, the message in your poem is so crucial to the understanding of faith, I'm amazed it's rarely addressed in faith writings. I just re-learned how to walk for the first time in 5 years & the effort took me 10 grueling months of physical therapy, after neck surgery. The faith I felt the whole time can only be described as in your poem, which conveys it perfectly. There was NOTHING to indicate my legs would ever work again, period.
I love that you didn't resort to the tired old line: "live by faith, not by sight" even tho it's sacred & true.
This is a great concept, well executed. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014
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thank you barley :)
Comment from Sasha
I like this very much. It is really very clever too. Excellent entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best. Keep up the great work. I've been away for awhile so I may have missed a few of your posts...sorry.
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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014
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I like this very much. It is really very clever too. Excellent entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best. Keep up the great work. I've been away for awhile so I may have missed a few of your posts...sorry.
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Comment Written 21-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014
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thank you smurphette :)