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Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Lost and Found"The clue is in the title!
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Comment from Erik McGinley
Very nice, Debbie. Reminds me of a rhyme my dad used to come out with when I was a kid ..
All of a sudden
An elephant's pudden
Came flying through the air
It hit Mrs Kelly
A slap on the belly
And knocked her down the stair
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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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Very nice, Debbie. Reminds me of a rhyme my dad used to come out with when I was a kid ..
All of a sudden
An elephant's pudden
Came flying through the air
It hit Mrs Kelly
A slap on the belly
And knocked her down the stair
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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LOL! Funny, I like that Erik, my kids will too! (but what's a pudden?!)
Thanks for your great feedback and for sharing your dad's rhyme with me :)
Bye for now, Debs x
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An elephant's pudding?
Have you never stepped in a pudding left in the field for you to grace your shoes with?
If that's not enough of hint, I'll give you a straight answer next question.
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LOL! Never heard dung referred to as a pudding before - but I will forever use that expression now! I've scraped dried pudding off shoes many a time unfortunately!!
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LOL! Never heard dung referred to as a pudding before - but I will forever use that expression now! I've scraped dried pudding off shoes many a time unfortunately!!
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LOL! Never heard dung referred to as a pudding before - but I will forever use that expression now! I've scraped dried pudding off shoes many a time unfortunately!!