February rhythm
Free verse poetry32 total reviews
Comment from Lynette Marie
This is a delightful poem of the new beginnings that spring brings. You have treated us to a plethora of lovely imagery, from crocuses to new-born lambs. "Earth's cyclical heartbeat" is a wonderful way to describe the revolving seasons.
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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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This is a delightful poem of the new beginnings that spring brings. You have treated us to a plethora of lovely imagery, from crocuses to new-born lambs. "Earth's cyclical heartbeat" is a wonderful way to describe the revolving seasons.
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you indeed for this great review - I love that phrase 'plethora of lovely imagery'. zanya
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
I love witnessing the earliest clues of the birth of spring in this charming free verse. "Light spills earlier from the curtain" has wonderful concrete imagery. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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I love witnessing the earliest clues of the birth of spring in this charming free verse. "Light spills earlier from the curtain" has wonderful concrete imagery. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you for this great review zanya