The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Ups & Downs Of My Puppy Days."Subtitle: God Never Lets Go!
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Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A well written and delightful telling of childhood tales.
It seems you had a lovely and supportive family and plenty of outdoor family fun.
The things that seemed so basic back then no have caveman status withmodrn children.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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A well written and delightful telling of childhood tales.
It seems you had a lovely and supportive family and plenty of outdoor family fun.
The things that seemed so basic back then no have caveman status withmodrn children.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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yeah well true for my first 8 years anyway. "Cave man" status I thought that was an interesting comment. HEHE!! Thanks for the great review.
Comment from michaelcahill
This is most enjoyable. I would think the more the merrier of this. It really is a history of times long gone. I love the details of the style of living without electricity as we know it now and plumbing and running water, all things we are so spoiled about now. I agree that they should update this posting business and make it more friendly. we are so restricted in display and adding pictures. This would be fun with more photos like the one of you in the sand at your studies. Classic! So much you could add here in detail that would all be an interesting read I think. What music you were studying? Where did the shopping get done? What kinds of shops were there? Who cooked and what was the menu and method? No microwaves back then I imagine!! Good point on the wills. Sure brings out the worst in some folks when it comes to divvying things up. Greed, boy oh boy. I have seen that more than once. Great piece here. mikey
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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This is most enjoyable. I would think the more the merrier of this. It really is a history of times long gone. I love the details of the style of living without electricity as we know it now and plumbing and running water, all things we are so spoiled about now. I agree that they should update this posting business and make it more friendly. we are so restricted in display and adding pictures. This would be fun with more photos like the one of you in the sand at your studies. Classic! So much you could add here in detail that would all be an interesting read I think. What music you were studying? Where did the shopping get done? What kinds of shops were there? Who cooked and what was the menu and method? No microwaves back then I imagine!! Good point on the wills. Sure brings out the worst in some folks when it comes to divvying things up. Greed, boy oh boy. I have seen that more than once. Great piece here. mikey
Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thanks mate! Yeah I should add that when Dad and Mum broke up both sides of the family blamed my Mo0ther. Should add that some place thanks for reminding me. I really appreciate the great review. Thanks good friend becoming moreso as days go by.
Comment from cinderbella
This one just made me sad, but not because of your writing, or even your story, but because it brings back to my memory so many things about my own dad. He built our house, wired it, built a double shed, double garage, and used every tool that Sears ever sold to build wonderful things for our home. But not only that, he was a fisherman, built boats, just knew everything about anything. That was my dad.
Your story brings it back, and that is why you are such a good writer, you can pull at the heartstrings of so many people.
Don't ever let your writings get away from you; just make sure they are always there for future generations. :) Sandra
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2013
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This one just made me sad, but not because of your writing, or even your story, but because it brings back to my memory so many things about my own dad. He built our house, wired it, built a double shed, double garage, and used every tool that Sears ever sold to build wonderful things for our home. But not only that, he was a fisherman, built boats, just knew everything about anything. That was my dad.
Your story brings it back, and that is why you are such a good writer, you can pull at the heartstrings of so many people.
Don't ever let your writings get away from you; just make sure they are always there for future generations. :) Sandra
Comment Written 01-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2013
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Awww thanks Sandra much appreciatred. have I given you a reviewers reward lately? See if I can do it again. Been working on some old sayings I have heard either from my Dad or passed on to me. One that Dad used to say was " I will give you a 'fer instance' " another one was I usually have four teaspoons of sugar but I don't stir it as I don't like it sweet! Duh!
There is a well known poem "The Shape I'm In" he always quoted " me pulse is weak and me blood is thin but I'm not too bad for the shape I'm in!" Looking forward to seeing my Dad in Glory some day. he claimed Christ for salvation weeks before he died Mum and I prayed for him for ovewr forty years. Thanks again. God Bless
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Pulls at my heartstrings, that's worth more to me than any other words could portray.
:) Sandra
Haven't written much lately, helping my mom who doesn't need "looking after' but needs someone to be there. Last post was my poem "Discrimination"
There will be moe to come. :) Hugs to you. Sandra
Comment from Norbanus
You have on heck of a good memory, Sankey, to recall all those times past. And you made a good point about the will. That is if you care what happens after you're gone.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2013
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You have on heck of a good memory, Sankey, to recall all those times past. And you made a good point about the will. That is if you care what happens after you're gone.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2013
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yeah well fact is we need to make another will as we have changed, and family does not figure in it at all, sadly.
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is an interesting chapter about your childhood that the author has created with this piece of writing. It is true that everybody has at least one book in them because everybody has a story to tell.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2013
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This is an interesting chapter about your childhood that the author has created with this piece of writing. It is true that everybody has at least one book in them because everybody has a story to tell.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2013
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AMEN for sure mate thanks again.
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I am catching up now. I have been busy with my house. It needs total refurbishing.
Comment from Nosha17
Well-written story with interesting descriptions of places from your childhood. It flows along well and is an enjoyable read. You may like to add a little humour to add a spark to it. Otherwise a good story. Enjoyable read. Faye
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2013
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Well-written story with interesting descriptions of places from your childhood. It flows along well and is an enjoyable read. You may like to add a little humour to add a spark to it. Otherwise a good story. Enjoyable read. Faye
Comment Written 01-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2013
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Hi Nosha. Not hard to get some humour I will work on that probably see some in some later chapters if you car e to look ahead.This was a very first run in this new chapter which was inserted after I thought some more on my childhood would be good. Thanks again.
Comment from BethShelby
I enjoyed reading this bit of your memories. Many or not so different from my own because I remember kerosene lamps which we had until I was tree and my grandparents had until I was ten. I have many happy memories of those days too.
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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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I enjoyed reading this bit of your memories. Many or not so different from my own because I remember kerosene lamps which we had until I was tree and my grandparents had until I was ten. I have many happy memories of those days too.
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Comment Written 31-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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Thanks Beth tried to add some member dollars but FS is playing up. I do have then to add. The First chapter has been re-done as well if you wanna look. Always appreciate your reviews there could be more on this one later. As you realise this is the "NEW Chapter TOO" hehe.