Geoffrey's Musings.
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Government Grief"A book of Stories, Essays and Poetry.
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Comment from adewpearl
I just sang this to "Johnny" and it works quite well!
lost it's rudder - drop the apostrophe
love the alliteration, humor and imagery in bursting like old Bessie's udder
and alliteration in better/bureaucrats/boot
excellent use of satire in making a serious political point
Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2013
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I just sang this to "Johnny" and it works quite well!
lost it's rudder - drop the apostrophe
love the alliteration, humor and imagery in bursting like old Bessie's udder
and alliteration in better/bureaucrats/boot
excellent use of satire in making a serious political point
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 11-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2013
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Thanks sorry about the apostrophe...bad habit. Appreciate the great review. I believe this works for all countries as well.Could you play the midi file?
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I got a notice that there was no plug in available to play it. That could well be my computer :-)
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Aw sorry. Window Media player should it are you on PC or Apple? There is a Media player for Apple Mac. Can't think of it just now.
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Aw sorry. Window Media player should it are you on PC or Apple? There is a Media player for Apple Mac. Can't think of it just now.
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Hi I went in and did another editif ya wanna look again someone pointed out the buns 'n' and the udder 'n' error.
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is a very topical poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. These politicians should put party politics aside and work for the good of the nation. This does not look good on the world stage.
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This is a very topical poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. These politicians should put party politics aside and work for the good of the nation. This does not look good on the world stage.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2013
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Thanks mate glad you dropped by. I believe it works for all our countries as well.
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Yes indeed.
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hope you caught the midi file I just went in and edited some word spags that were pointed out.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, sankey, you did an excellent job writing this song about politics as usual. i enjoyed reading it and have always loved when johnny comes marching home.
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this is very well written, sankey, you did an excellent job writing this song about politics as usual. i enjoyed reading it and have always loved when johnny comes marching home.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2013
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Yeah I need to re-do the Midi again timing is a bit rough. I figure the tune is probably a National Treasure, apparently used during the Civil War in America and then later in the WW's. Not sure about Copyright. My arrangement anyway hehe. Thanks for the great review. I think it is relevant on either side of the Pacific or wherever.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Ah, how hard it must be to live in one of those countries where you can't publically poke fun at your political 'leaders'!
I enjoyed the sense of fun and the relevance to the current stalemate - not that I understand it from this distance.
Favourite line, the one about Old Bessie's udder....
Steve
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2013
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Ah, how hard it must be to live in one of those countries where you can't publically poke fun at your political 'leaders'!
I enjoyed the sense of fun and the relevance to the current stalemate - not that I understand it from this distance.
Favourite line, the one about Old Bessie's udder....
Steve
Comment Written 11-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2013
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Hi Steve where are you? I feel like it is relevant to all Beauraucracies meself. Thanks for the review hope you got there after the music went on. I am on the East Coast of Australia.
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That's an awful big coast. I am recently returned to NZ after 10 years in Cairns...
yes, our politicians can be much the same, although I did think Aussie ones were somehow more 'political' than kiwi ones.
Steve
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Hi Steve we are 54 klm west of Sydney. Check my Chapter on Friends I had a bit of a go at the Kiwi's. "With friends like you who needs 'enema's ie you give me the .....
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Hi Steve we are 54 klm west of Sydney. Check my Chapter on Friends I had a bit of a go at the Kiwi's. "With friends like you who needs 'enema's ie you give me the .....
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Hi Steve we are 54 klm west of Sydney. Check my Chapter on Friends I had a bit of a go at the Kiwi's. "With friends like you who needs 'enema's ie you give me the .....
Comment from l.raven
LOL...This is so funny, but oh so true...I love the way you made a song out of it....I wish they would get the boot...so very well written...xxoo
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LOL...This is so funny, but oh so true...I love the way you made a song out of it....I wish they would get the boot...so very well written...xxoo
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Comment Written 11-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2013
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I just got the Midi file on a bit rough as I played it my self.
Thanks for the review and it probably applies to all Governments of all countries huh! I am in Australia. have a look again.
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your so welcome...xxoo
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The Midi file is on now!