The Night
This poem describes the mysterious beauty and magical music of the night.139 total reviews
Comment from joneau2
Succinct. Although I see you're recognized, does being recognized provide you the literary license to write this piece, which, quite honestly, I don't understand. However, you didn't get where you are without most reviewers finding your work excellent. But, alas, not me ... sorry.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013
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Succinct. Although I see you're recognized, does being recognized provide you the literary license to write this piece, which, quite honestly, I don't understand. However, you didn't get where you are without most reviewers finding your work excellent. But, alas, not me ... sorry.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013
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Its okay, don't be sorry..Thanks for the review.
Comment from kleck140
You certainly should win the contest. I read this poem as the seasons of life. When the moon sets on life, it is the senile moon, the melting sky made me think of getting older and slowing down, night sings lullaby, is for those final day. You truly have a good style for poetry. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013
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You certainly should win the contest. I read this poem as the seasons of life. When the moon sets on life, it is the senile moon, the melting sky made me think of getting older and slowing down, night sings lullaby, is for those final day. You truly have a good style for poetry. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for your lovely review.It means a lot to me.You have described the poem so well even I could not do that way..I am so glad that you liked it...
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Thanks for your quick reply!
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You are most welcome.
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Thanks!
Comment from Kidlike101
correct 5/7/5 format by this reader.
love the image and the over-all visuals and colour combos used.
The subject of the poem is rather romantic. good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013
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correct 5/7/5 format by this reader.
love the image and the over-all visuals and colour combos used.
The subject of the poem is rather romantic. good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for this lovely review.
Comment from lakeport
The night, indeed the romantic moon, thats's a very lovely expressed 5/7/5/poem, thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Hugs!lakeport.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2013
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The night, indeed the romantic moon, thats's a very lovely expressed 5/7/5/poem, thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Hugs!lakeport.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much for your kind review..
I am really glad that you care to read it and review it..Thanks again..take care.
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your welcome.Hugs!lakeport.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I never thought of the moon as senile, but why not. I love the descriptions you used in this poem, 'melting in the sky' leaves us with a wonderful image. Good job.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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I never thought of the moon as senile, but why not. I love the descriptions you used in this poem, 'melting in the sky' leaves us with a wonderful image. Good job.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much for your review and for your support.It means a lot.Glad that you like it.
Comment from garrymc5
Too short!
I'd like you to extend it, to work your imagination harder
'senile' , melting'..... lullaby (so close yo bye bye or good bye.
You realy must swim int o your subconscious, and continue swimming down stream.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Too short!
I'd like you to extend it, to work your imagination harder
'senile' , melting'..... lullaby (so close yo bye bye or good bye.
You realy must swim int o your subconscious, and continue swimming down stream.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Thank you.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend this is well written and you bring the picture to life so well using this form to its full potential well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Yes my friend this is well written and you bring the picture to life so well using this form to its full potential well done regards Jill
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much for reading rating and reviewing my poem.I am glad that you like it.
Comment from Treischel
You have written a lovely 5-7-5 formatted poem that highlights the moon. Very poetic description of "melting in the sky". Quite visual. The last line about a lullaby carries the serenity to another level. Nice,y done! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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You have written a lovely 5-7-5 formatted poem that highlights the moon. Very poetic description of "melting in the sky". Quite visual. The last line about a lullaby carries the serenity to another level. Nice,y done! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much for reading rating and reviewing my poem.I am glad that you like it.
Comment from Sonjalee
A great poem. I love poems that describe nature's day and night. You said in 17 words what many of us try to say in countless words. Night, singing a lullaby. is supporting the old "guy", the senile moon as it melts away. It is kind of sad! Sonjalee
PS-after thinking about it , I think this deserves a 6*.
sonjalee
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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A great poem. I love poems that describe nature's day and night. You said in 17 words what many of us try to say in countless words. Night, singing a lullaby. is supporting the old "guy", the senile moon as it melts away. It is kind of sad! Sonjalee
PS-after thinking about it , I think this deserves a 6*.
sonjalee
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Ah! I am honoured..Thank you so much for your six star rating and for your so kind review..It means a lot to me.I really appreciate it.
Comment from cvcopac
More proof the moon's made of cheese, not limburger. Personification of the moon shows me an older person, contented and in harmony with their surroundings. Kenny
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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More proof the moon's made of cheese, not limburger. Personification of the moon shows me an older person, contented and in harmony with their surroundings. Kenny
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my poem.I like your comment.Its really nice.
