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All Those Puzzling Pieces

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What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?

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Comment from Jendowoz
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Another lovely poem, Sharyn. I love seeing the clouds drifting across a full moon it's so peaceful. It always appeals to the romantic in me. It reads well aloud. Good job.

regards, Jen

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2013

reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
    Bless you, Jen! :)S
Comment from McMurry903
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This is such a wonderful poem, Sharyn! I absolutely love full moons and you did them justice here. Beautiful imagery with such a smooth flow throughout. Excellent work! :)Brian

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 Comment Written 31-Mar-2013

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    thx Brian! :)S
Comment from Tonulak
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Dear Sharon,
I enjoyed this poem as it had a different take on "moongazing". I liked the metaphor of it being a window which was very original. Nice job--Ted

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    thx Ted! :)s