All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Sugared Stars"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Dave Russell
Such a slippery little ditty...very clever, a bit of a tongue twister. I have to say that I love the second line, and the fact that I learned a new word today (lambent)...had to look it up :) Very nice read.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Such a slippery little ditty...very clever, a bit of a tongue twister. I have to say that I love the second line, and the fact that I learned a new word today (lambent)...had to look it up :) Very nice read.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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oh I've been in love with that word for a while Dave - just DYING for a chance to use it! Bless you, my dear - glad you had tongue-twisting double-dripping fun! :)S
Comment from Opal H.
Ooh... A scene by scene description of the beginning of a romantic evening. It's so full of imagery and movement it's like being part of it.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Ooh... A scene by scene description of the beginning of a romantic evening. It's so full of imagery and movement it's like being part of it.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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and chocolate ice-cream to boot! :)))))
Comment from God's Writer
A very real to life poem my friend. So full of beauty and common sense. You express yourself like a professional writer. Thank you
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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A very real to life poem my friend. So full of beauty and common sense. You express yourself like a professional writer. Thank you
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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oh you're BACK!!! how ARE you my dear??? how did your surgery go? I don't believe you're already here again! :)Sharyn
Comment from Curtis Hatch
Sharyn,
This is a lovely romantic story with excellent imagery that allows my mind's eye to behold the joy of what is happening.
Your color selections, font, format and photo make great finishing touches for a beautiful work.
Curtis
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Sharyn,
This is a lovely romantic story with excellent imagery that allows my mind's eye to behold the joy of what is happening.
Your color selections, font, format and photo make great finishing touches for a beautiful work.
Curtis
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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thx so much Curtis! :)s
Comment from Jewell McChesney
I LOVE the story you tell within the lines of such a well written romantic poem! Woooooo such imagery; the dripping ice cream and sugared stars...
lovely, just lovely.
Yes, you are a visionary, my dear.
Good luck in this contest!
Hugs,
Jewell
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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I LOVE the story you tell within the lines of such a well written romantic poem! Woooooo such imagery; the dripping ice cream and sugared stars...
lovely, just lovely.
Yes, you are a visionary, my dear.
Good luck in this contest!
Hugs,
Jewell
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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bless you right back Jewell Vis!! and a delighted THANK YOU SO MUCH for your lovely six on this one!
Blessings to a like mind ... hugs, Sharyn
Comment from Nebukadneser
You are the other side of brilliant, me girl. how can you come out with something as beautiful and true as this gem of a poem, me girl - You're a chick with diamonds in her hair. The anticipation and the nonsensical love which follow that first kiss is a wonder the two lovers will never ever experience in their lives again
you're a star, me girl
Cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadnesere
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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You are the other side of brilliant, me girl. how can you come out with something as beautiful and true as this gem of a poem, me girl - You're a chick with diamonds in her hair. The anticipation and the nonsensical love which follow that first kiss is a wonder the two lovers will never ever experience in their lives again
you're a star, me girl
Cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadnesere
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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hot bananas and whipped cream to YOU my dear! :))Sharyn
Comment from dmt1967
This is a great love poem I like the two lovers building up to the moment and the soft tenderness and love I feel emanating from the poem good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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This is a great love poem I like the two lovers building up to the moment and the soft tenderness and love I feel emanating from the poem good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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thx so much my dear! :)Sharyn
Comment from L. Sherman
Lovely poem and a real joy to read. Tells such a lovely story and set to such a lovely scene. Your words really come to life as their love unfurls on this idyllic beach. :) Makes me warm and fuzzy, which this far away from Summer is always nice.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Lovely poem and a real joy to read. Tells such a lovely story and set to such a lovely scene. Your words really come to life as their love unfurls on this idyllic beach. :) Makes me warm and fuzzy, which this far away from Summer is always nice.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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thx so much LS ... let's hear it for chocolate! :)Sharyn
Comment from Irish Rain
awwww!!!!! i really loved this summer flirtation....beautifully written, and the artwork you chose suits it well....reminds me so..of days gone by!!!!! thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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awwww!!!!! i really loved this summer flirtation....beautifully written, and the artwork you chose suits it well....reminds me so..of days gone by!!!!! thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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thx so much jo - let's go to the beach and OD on chocolate, hmm? :)Sharyn
Comment from MizKat
Sharyn - This is not only a well written love poem, but it is interesting and cute the way you wrote it. I really enjoyed another piece of you lovely word art. Kat
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Sharyn - This is not only a well written love poem, but it is interesting and cute the way you wrote it. I really enjoyed another piece of you lovely word art. Kat
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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BLESS YOU KAT! :)