Rabbit
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Comment from GracieAnn
This is a delightful story full of simplicities of an more basic and uncluttered life. The story and conversation flow nicely and allow the reader to "be there". I had 2 boys and don't I know about rivalry! I will read more! Thanks.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
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This is a delightful story full of simplicities of an more basic and uncluttered life. The story and conversation flow nicely and allow the reader to "be there". I had 2 boys and don't I know about rivalry! I will read more! Thanks.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
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Thanks for reading Gracie and a review that made me smile. You do understand! Bill
Comment from Cariboubill
I love your story. I'm the oldest of 10...6 boys, 4 girls, so Rabbit's trouble with his brother rings true. One of my favorite books is, "A Painted House" by John Grisham. Your story has the same genuine flavor. Looking forward to more chapters.
...Bill
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I love your story. I'm the oldest of 10...6 boys, 4 girls, so Rabbit's trouble with his brother rings true. One of my favorite books is, "A Painted House" by John Grisham. Your story has the same genuine flavor. Looking forward to more chapters.
...Bill
Comment Written 13-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
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Thanks for reading. I loved Painted House. Different for Grisham, but in a great way. Bill
Comment from muezza56
i really enjoyed reading this story, and having three brothers, can relate to the anger between Rabbit and John. really well written and enjoyable and real-life storyline
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
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i really enjoyed reading this story, and having three brothers, can relate to the anger between Rabbit and John. really well written and enjoyable and real-life storyline
Comment Written 13-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
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Thanks for reading and your feedback.
Comment from TonyD
The story was quite easy to follow, not having to reference other chapters to know what was happening. I think that is a definite plus. I like your characters and, although John is very much a part of the story, I gravitate more to Rabbit. Perhaps because of his name.
Tony
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The story was quite easy to follow, not having to reference other chapters to know what was happening. I think that is a definite plus. I like your characters and, although John is very much a part of the story, I gravitate more to Rabbit. Perhaps because of his name.
Tony
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Comment Written 13-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
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Thanks for reading Tony. If you can circle back to ch 1, you can see where the nickname came from. Bill
Comment from N.K. Wagner
No doubt about it - your mother was indeed a saint, Bill. You boys were a trial when you were little. Hope it got better as you grew. I love the "baby dinosaur" bit. So "little boy". :) Nancy
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No doubt about it - your mother was indeed a saint, Bill. You boys were a trial when you were little. Hope it got better as you grew. I love the "baby dinosaur" bit. So "little boy". :) Nancy
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Comment Written 13-Feb-2013
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Thanks Nancy - my mom is a saint! Bill
