Straw-Sticks-Bricks & Plastic
A Curly Tail of Dodgy Porkmanship...31 total reviews
Comment from catch22
Well well well, I am so happy to read a poem from you with overall excellent iambic meter and loads of sarcasm and attitude:) Loved it. I did find a small problem with the flow of the following line because I think you forgot a word:
soon huffed and puffed that house (to?) death
Great story poem for the (older) kids. Nice work.
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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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Well well well, I am so happy to read a poem from you with overall excellent iambic meter and loads of sarcasm and attitude:) Loved it. I did find a small problem with the flow of the following line because I think you forgot a word:
soon huffed and puffed that house (to?) death
Great story poem for the (older) kids. Nice work.
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Comment Written 26-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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LOL Thanks for a delightful review and the spag pick up.
All fixed. Glad you enjoyed my write.
Cheers P