Silence isn't golden
Silence is golden - is it really?33 total reviews
Comment from Crystal Vail
I completely agree. It is not golden but isolating. Good use of syllables. I feel it usually helps to attach a picture to set the mood or image. Best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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I completely agree. It is not golden but isolating. Good use of syllables. I feel it usually helps to attach a picture to set the mood or image. Best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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Thanks - how do I attach a picture?
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It should be the very first option above where you enter the title. Looks like this:
"Picture:(recommended) -select from FanArtReview.com- | -select from your computer-
(include a photo or drawing) - help "
You can browse through member's artwork or upload your own photo. Hope this makes since. I am not the best at giving directions. lol :)
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Thank you - is it possible to edit it and add a pic now?
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Yes, you can go in as many times as you want until the contest closes. Then, once the winners are announced you can then edit even more. Pictures and choice of colors for your background and words really help promote your work. To edit, click on your work so you can see it. Towards the top should be a button that says "edit this"
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Thank you - I've added a pic now - what do you think?
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I like it! Nice work. Hopefully you will get some great reviews. Best of luck.
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I'd like to inform you that I have edited my poem, please take a moment to read it if you can. Thank you.
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Looks good. You did a good job choosing your words/picture to express emotion and message. best of luck :)
Comment from prayingpoet
Great 5-7-5 Poetry. I must agree that silence can be very dark at times. I am a people person and silence is not always fun.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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Great 5-7-5 Poetry. I must agree that silence can be very dark at times. I am a people person and silence is not always fun.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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Me too, I love having friends around, and being alone can be very... blue... sometimes. Thanks for the review.
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I'd like to inform you that I have edited my poem, please take a moment to read it if you can. Thank you.
Comment from l.raven
I will say you do have apoint here. Silence is deafening. Nothing to enjoy. Very well written. And I like the wording you used....well done
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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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I will say you do have apoint here. Silence is deafening. Nothing to enjoy. Very well written. And I like the wording you used....well done
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Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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Thank you for your review!
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I'd like to inform you that I have edited my poem, please take a moment to read it if you can. Thank you.