Thoughtful Poems and Prose
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Comment from mruss1
Sorry I can you the six this deserves it is quite exceptional. I love the sea and have written many pieses about it. When i am lost this is where i go to find peace and hopefully myself. It is constantly changing yet appears quite the same, never mind the treasures that are buried below.I collect starfish one off my hobbies I have a couple hundred spread through the house to remind me of the ocean and journeys there.The artwork is great too! Take care and really loved this piece.....Mark
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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Sorry I can you the six this deserves it is quite exceptional. I love the sea and have written many pieses about it. When i am lost this is where i go to find peace and hopefully myself. It is constantly changing yet appears quite the same, never mind the treasures that are buried below.I collect starfish one off my hobbies I have a couple hundred spread through the house to remind me of the ocean and journeys there.The artwork is great too! Take care and really loved this piece.....Mark
Comment Written 23-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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Thank you for your good review. I am glad that you enjoyed it.
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You are welcome I found that it spoke to me. This is pretty rare only a couple of people can do this.You are one of them you write kind of simular type poems. All your pieces are very well written you are a bit more polished than me:) I am rough around the edges but I have a real good heart:) Hope you are well and meant to ask do you have kids? Not goats but children:) You do have a farm:) I have one Travis he is 26 sort of grown up but not quite all the way. I used to get mad at my parent because they always treated me as a child. But I get it now your children are always that in your eyes.....Mark
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Hi, thanks for your reply. I have a lovely husband and two sons. Both boys want to be Engineers. The older one is in his second year at university and the younger one starts there next year. My husband is a veterinary surgeon and we have a sheep farm. Cheers CG
Comment from TammyGail
Loved your imagery ..excellent work crafting this verse it was well written and expressed
your imagery adds that extra touch
thanks for the great read
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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Loved your imagery ..excellent work crafting this verse it was well written and expressed
your imagery adds that extra touch
thanks for the great read
Comment Written 22-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from terry drake
Very nicely done. This poem has a very good cadence conducted for our pleasure. Your rhyme scheme was well chosen and contributed to the message. congratulations.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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Very nicely done. This poem has a very good cadence conducted for our pleasure. Your rhyme scheme was well chosen and contributed to the message. congratulations.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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Thank you Terry for your lovely review! I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
Comment from juliedickson55
This is so visual and nice
'White horses ride your waves,
Foaming above hidden caves"
Yes, "Tireless, constant haunting sea"
I love the sea in its constant force, perhaps the most constant in nature.
On the beach at night, the invisibility of waves in moonless sky beckon with their rhythmic voices.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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This is so visual and nice
'White horses ride your waves,
Foaming above hidden caves"
Yes, "Tireless, constant haunting sea"
I love the sea in its constant force, perhaps the most constant in nature.
On the beach at night, the invisibility of waves in moonless sky beckon with their rhythmic voices.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from jmdg1954
Wow this is an awesome poem.,I foundvitvwell written andvchoicebof wording very eloquently done.
The artwork supporting the poem was well chosen.
Overall I thought you did a fine job with this.,,
John
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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Wow this is an awesome poem.,I foundvitvwell written andvchoicebof wording very eloquently done.
The artwork supporting the poem was well chosen.
Overall I thought you did a fine job with this.,,
John
Comment Written 22-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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Thank you John! I am glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from gazzagodbod
wow i love your work this one is stunning ive searched my box for a six but none there sigh but take it from me this is exceptional xxgazzaxx
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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wow i love your work this one is stunning ive searched my box for a six but none there sigh but take it from me this is exceptional xxgazzaxx
Comment Written 22-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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Oh thank you! Your work got the thumbs up from me in the contest. Thanks for a lovely review.
Comment from santapola
Hi a lovely poem and made one feel the motions of the waves. May I make one suggestion and that is second to last stanza, last line,add a word in because this was the only place I felt the flow halted a little bit. eg. "Powerful brutal foaming ocean" word obviously of your choice
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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Hi a lovely poem and made one feel the motions of the waves. May I make one suggestion and that is second to last stanza, last line,add a word in because this was the only place I felt the flow halted a little bit. eg. "Powerful brutal foaming ocean" word obviously of your choice
Comment Written 22-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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Thank you for your lovely review! Thank you for the suggestion too, I will look into it sometime soon. Cheers! CG
Comment from dmt1967
This is a very cool poem about the sea I like the haunting feel I got when reading it and the picture with the mermaid thank you for reading
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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This is a very cool poem about the sea I like the haunting feel I got when reading it and the picture with the mermaid thank you for reading
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to read my work. Thanks for your good review.
CG
Comment from Bindu Saxena
You are an artist par excellence!Please accept my heartiest congratulations for the artwork you crafted.I admire it.
As regards the poem,it's no less a work of creative thinking and imagination.You dealt with the mighty sea's mysteries in a beautiful way with excellent command!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2012
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You are an artist par excellence!Please accept my heartiest congratulations for the artwork you crafted.I admire it.
As regards the poem,it's no less a work of creative thinking and imagination.You dealt with the mighty sea's mysteries in a beautiful way with excellent command!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2012
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Thank you Bindu for your wonderful review and for your kind comments about my art.
Comment from visionary1234
You've established some strong, "surging" ocean rhythms here, especially in the last couple of verses - lovely! love the sounds and calls of the sirens ... though they "lie" not "lay" so that's a small grammatical correction that's really important ... love the general "motion" of this piece Curly - well done! best wishes, Sharyn
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2012
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You've established some strong, "surging" ocean rhythms here, especially in the last couple of verses - lovely! love the sounds and calls of the sirens ... though they "lie" not "lay" so that's a small grammatical correction that's really important ... love the general "motion" of this piece Curly - well done! best wishes, Sharyn
Comment Written 19-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2012
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Thank you Sharyn for your wonderful review. I will try to look into it. Many thanks.
