Who?
Food for thought, despite life's trials39 total reviews
Comment from MizKat
jlsavell - I think your poem is beautiful. The flow is wonderful and the rhyming is superb. The poetic story it tells is great. I like everything about it. Kat
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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jlsavell - I think your poem is beautiful. The flow is wonderful and the rhyming is superb. The poetic story it tells is great. I like everything about it. Kat
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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Mis Kat, thank you so very much for stopping by to read and review this work. I am humbled, truly... jlsavell
Comment from Georgia333
The poem was very thought provoking filled with a special an ambiance that reminds us are how lucky we are. Lovely piece of work
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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The poem was very thought provoking filled with a special an ambiance that reminds us are how lucky we are. Lovely piece of work
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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Georgia333, thank you for stopping by to read nasd review my work. jlsavell
Comment from kashmayank
the poem was a little long could havebeen shortened ,all the best for future few thoughts were very well expressed but length was a issue
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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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the poem was a little long could havebeen shortened ,all the best for future few thoughts were very well expressed but length was a issue
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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kashmayyank, thank you for stopping by to read and review my work.. jlsavell
Comment from marchapril
I know the answer to that last line. :) I love that you give credit where credit is due. But what's even better is how you carry the theme of your poem from the first word to the very last. I think your ending is brilliant! My favorite line, "to soar with dreams to heights untold." There's just something so beautiful about that whole stanza.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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I know the answer to that last line. :) I love that you give credit where credit is due. But what's even better is how you carry the theme of your poem from the first word to the very last. I think your ending is brilliant! My favorite line, "to soar with dreams to heights untold." There's just something so beautiful about that whole stanza.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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marchapril, thank you for stopping by to read and review my work. I apologize for the delay in answering. I appreciate your time very much and your comments are truly humbling,, again thank you .. jlsavell
Comment from artemis53
LOL, Jimi. You've enumerated just about everything in such a lovely way with such a gorgeous color as the backdrop. "Who drew the line where shores belong Where far rolling waves should only creep. " That line is wondrous!
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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LOL, Jimi. You've enumerated just about everything in such a lovely way with such a gorgeous color as the backdrop. "Who drew the line where shores belong Where far rolling waves should only creep. " That line is wondrous!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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artemis53, once again a big big thank you!!!!! Words coming from a high calibre poet as you humble me greatly... again thank you.. jimi
Comment from mauial
This reminds me of the account in the Bible book of Job when God questioned Job with similar questions to show Job how little he knew of His creator. (Job 40-41) Great flowing poem.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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This reminds me of the account in the Bible book of Job when God questioned Job with similar questions to show Job how little he knew of His creator. (Job 40-41) Great flowing poem.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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mauial, thank you for stopping by to read and review my work. Yes, now that you say that I do remeber the conversation in the Scriptures. I apologize for just returning my gratitude, thank you ever so much..jlsavell
Comment from uniqueauthor
Who indeed, the Spirit of Holiness is he, who provides each breath I take and every joy I receive.
Who gave me the insight to share this with you
It's neither a riddle, nor a puzzle, to answer Who.
You may be right about riddles and puzzles, but the truth will always be the truth, too many people don't want to know who. I enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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Who indeed, the Spirit of Holiness is he, who provides each breath I take and every joy I receive.
Who gave me the insight to share this with you
It's neither a riddle, nor a puzzle, to answer Who.
You may be right about riddles and puzzles, but the truth will always be the truth, too many people don't want to know who. I enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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uniqueauthor, first of all, a sincere and heartfelt apology for just returning gratitude for this exceptional review.And next a big thank you for such a wonderful compliment and comment.. thank you... jlsavell
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You're welcome. Peace for today. Linda
Comment from Sandie lee
This is a very profound and heart-felt poem - the question always being the underlying point.
I like these lines;
Who gave the elephant its wisdom and grace
To protect and guide her herd to flourish in the wild
Well done :P
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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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This is a very profound and heart-felt poem - the question always being the underlying point.
I like these lines;
Who gave the elephant its wisdom and grace
To protect and guide her herd to flourish in the wild
Well done :P
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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Sandie lee, thank you ever so much for stopping by to read and review my work. I apologize for the delay in answering.. jlsavell
Comment from Crystal Carey
OK I love the poem and the artwork it is really good. But the six stars come from your authors notes. I will try really hard not to sue you, but I live in such a litigation happy world..
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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OK I love the poem and the artwork it is really good. But the six stars come from your authors notes. I will try really hard not to sue you, but I live in such a litigation happy world..
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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Crystal Cary, thank you so very much for this exceptional review. I apologize for just returning my appreciation, .. my world has been quite hectic lately, but in a good way, always in a good way.. again thank you so much!!! jlsavell
