The Red Dress
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "A virgin no more..."The story of a teenage girl
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Comment from rheabug
This is a very well written chapter in your ongoing book. I love the story line and hope to read more it the future.Blessing, Linda
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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This is a very well written chapter in your ongoing book. I love the story line and hope to read more it the future.Blessing, Linda
Comment Written 25-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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I would be absolutely delighted if you did! Thank you so much for your lovely review, Linda. Alexis x
Comment from AlexAX
Background: is it supposed to be "was no other choice" or has? Such a great chapter and you can clearly see they love each other profusely. Great dialogue and intimacy between them, their playfulness makes me smile. That hook at the end, I can only imagine someone else will turn up to spoil their new found peace.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Background: is it supposed to be "was no other choice" or has? Such a great chapter and you can clearly see they love each other profusely. Great dialogue and intimacy between them, their playfulness makes me smile. That hook at the end, I can only imagine someone else will turn up to spoil their new found peace.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Thank you for catching that. I was so busy editing the book, I didn't even notice that! I'm delighted that you're enjoying it. Nearly half way through! Alexis x
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You're welcome :)
Comment from Hareem.S
The lovemaking scene you have described is very vivid and good. The chaper is long , but is so interesting that it kept me engaged till the end. Lisa is a cute and a lil insecure girl, and thier love is so perfect. Can't wait to see what happens next.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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The lovemaking scene you have described is very vivid and good. The chaper is long , but is so interesting that it kept me engaged till the end. Lisa is a cute and a lil insecure girl, and thier love is so perfect. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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What a wonderful compliment! Thank you so much for your review and fabulous six. It is greatly appreciated. Another two chapters posted today. Alexis x
Comment from emmaysavage
Usually I can do without a chapter full of sexual encounters, but you kept up the interest. The conversation was very believable, especially the playful parts.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Usually I can do without a chapter full of sexual encounters, but you kept up the interest. The conversation was very believable, especially the playful parts.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much for persevering! Your review is greatly appreciated. Alexis x
Comment from debskatz
Hey alexis,
Dang, what's in store for them? Nice hook!!
Found a couple of spag:
"Of course not, Lisa!(") I didn't think
Do you think your mother(')s
Great chapter! Thanks for sharing it with us. I look forward to the next one!!
smiles,
deb
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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Hey alexis,
Dang, what's in store for them? Nice hook!!
Found a couple of spag:
"Of course not, Lisa!(") I didn't think
Do you think your mother(')s
Great chapter! Thanks for sharing it with us. I look forward to the next one!!
smiles,
deb
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Comment Written 25-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Got the little critters, thanks to you! Alexis x
Comment from MumEsGirl
Now this story is really taking off. Im glad that Lisa has settled for somebody that loves her. Sadly I feel yet another sting in the tail on the horizon.
I also note that the brother is very much in the background, perhaps we shall hear from him soon
kate
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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Now this story is really taking off. Im glad that Lisa has settled for somebody that loves her. Sadly I feel yet another sting in the tail on the horizon.
I also note that the brother is very much in the background, perhaps we shall hear from him soon
kate
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Comment Written 25-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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As you probably know by now, the 'stings' are mostly of their own making! Thank you so much for your wonderful continued support. Alexis x