Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Embrace Integrity"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
102 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Embrace Integrity' is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually uplifting piece. This talented poet's advice would be foolish to ignore. It was a pleasure to both read and review a work of this quality.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2012
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'Embrace Integrity' is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually uplifting piece. This talented poet's advice would be foolish to ignore. It was a pleasure to both read and review a work of this quality.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2012
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Thank you so much for your encouraging and uplifting review, sorry about my delay in writing back. With kindness, Sarah
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Sarah, you're more than welcome.
Best wishes, the Duchess
Comment from Henry Greenwood
Cleanse your hearts from the sins of youth,
From now speak only words of truth.
The First Place must belong to Me.
Serve Me in truth and humility.
Well done!
Thank you for posting!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2012
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Cleanse your hearts from the sins of youth,
From now speak only words of truth.
The First Place must belong to Me.
Serve Me in truth and humility.
Well done!
Thank you for posting!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2012
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Thank you so much for your great review. I'm so happy you liked my poem about integrity. With kindness, Sarah
Comment from Beans
Very interesting poem, I completely understand what you mean about integrity, and negative influences on kids in society (I'm 18). I'm not at all religious, and I think that spirituality is great, but that it isn't the only answer to succeeding in modern society.
Your poem is beautiful, and very well written. I completely agree with your message, thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2012
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Very interesting poem, I completely understand what you mean about integrity, and negative influences on kids in society (I'm 18). I'm not at all religious, and I think that spirituality is great, but that it isn't the only answer to succeeding in modern society.
Your poem is beautiful, and very well written. I completely agree with your message, thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2012
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Thank you Beans, this is great reaction, l loved reading especially from a young person. Sorry for my late reply, was not very well. With a warm greeting, Sarah
Comment from sunnilicious
'Embrace Integrity' is a graceful poem. It is full of wisdom. Spirituality is important. I think it's something that we learn. Not necessarily always from church, but family and environment(s). Good work.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2012
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'Embrace Integrity' is a graceful poem. It is full of wisdom. Spirituality is important. I think it's something that we learn. Not necessarily always from church, but family and environment(s). Good work.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2012
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Thank you so much for your great review and I'm so glad you liked it and got something out of it to strengthening of your spirit. Sorry for my late replay, With warmness, Sarah
Comment from Inge_Meldgaard
Extremely well written, with such a wonderful message. Your words are elegant, strong and true, which is as it should be. The rhyming and flow of the poem is excellent, as is the overall 'feeling' of the words and the earnest emotion that formed them.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2012
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Extremely well written, with such a wonderful message. Your words are elegant, strong and true, which is as it should be. The rhyming and flow of the poem is excellent, as is the overall 'feeling' of the words and the earnest emotion that formed them.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2012
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Dear Inge. Sorry for late reply but I really appreciate your great review, it was enlightening to my heart as well as strengthening and encouraging. Thank you!
Comment from amada
Such a sweet and very important counsel to our youngsters. I like this phrase "Embrace integrity, My warrior band. On its truth and honesty you must stand."
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2012
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Such a sweet and very important counsel to our youngsters. I like this phrase "Embrace integrity, My warrior band. On its truth and honesty you must stand."
Comment Written 15-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2012
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Dear Amada.
Sorry for this late reply! Thank you so much for your great review that encouraged my heart. With love, Sarah
Comment from Glasstruth
With an awesome picture, and the poem, the way it describes youth as warriors are what we all are. You're asking the rest of us to: "Hold nothing back, My dearest Loves" and with that the future is ours. Wonderful!! Les
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2012
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With an awesome picture, and the poem, the way it describes youth as warriors are what we all are. You're asking the rest of us to: "Hold nothing back, My dearest Loves" and with that the future is ours. Wonderful!! Les
Comment Written 15-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2012
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Dear Les.
Sorry this comes rather late, but nevertheless very helpful and to the point. Yes, it is wonderful but yet challenging. With love, Sarah
Comment from Razz
Cleanse your hearts from the sins of youth,
From now speak only words of truth.
The First Place must belong to Me.
Serve Me in truth and humility.
So wonderfully expressed.
So full of truths and profundities.
I'm afraid, however,that our youth has not got very many, if any at all, good role models. Not even good parenting.
Great writing.
Razz
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2012
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Cleanse your hearts from the sins of youth,
From now speak only words of truth.
The First Place must belong to Me.
Serve Me in truth and humility.
So wonderfully expressed.
So full of truths and profundities.
I'm afraid, however,that our youth has not got very many, if any at all, good role models. Not even good parenting.
Great writing.
Razz
Comment Written 15-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2012
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Dear Razz.
Thank you so much for your heart touching review, sorry for my late reply. Pray the Lord will guid you in live and He'll fail you! The only good role models there are, are those that are filled with the love of Jesus. With much love, Sarah
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Dear Razz.
Thank you so much for your heart touching review but pray for more role models in the world, it is such a great need! Sorry for my late reply. With much love, Sarah
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You're very welcome, Sarah.
Yes, God knows.
Have a wonderful day.
Razz
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Thank you, Razz. Good to hear from you!
God bless you!
Sarah
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You too!
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
Yes, this is a beautiful peom but it leaves me wondering and wishing there were ways of reaching a great many of the youth who will not or cannot bring themselves to listen to this sound advice. A lovely flow and rhythm there is nothing I would suggest you change or add. The poem certainly needs nothing to be taken from it either.
Warm wishes
kat
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Yes, this is a beautiful peom but it leaves me wondering and wishing there were ways of reaching a great many of the youth who will not or cannot bring themselves to listen to this sound advice. A lovely flow and rhythm there is nothing I would suggest you change or add. The poem certainly needs nothing to be taken from it either.
Warm wishes
kat
Comment Written 15-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from ericawrites
This is a very well written poem,
flows well, rhymes beautifully,
with a very strong moral message.
Well thought out and cleverly
constructed.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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This is a very well written poem,
flows well, rhymes beautifully,
with a very strong moral message.
Well thought out and cleverly
constructed.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
