The Heir Apparent
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Getting to Know Mr. Hurley"A family learns their father is a serial killer
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm on pins and needles waiting for what Mac has to tell us.
He took a deep breath then slowly exhaled before responding. "That depends on your definition of winning."
(Not possitive but I think a comma, not a period is needed after responding.)
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reply by the author on 08-May-2011
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I'm on pins and needles waiting for what Mac has to tell us.
He took a deep breath then slowly exhaled before responding. "That depends on your definition of winning."
(Not possitive but I think a comma, not a period is needed after responding.)
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 08-May-2011
reply by the author on 08-May-2011
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I'll check that sentence out. Glad you liked this one.