The Heir Apparent
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Confidentiality or Conscience"A family learns their father is a serial killer
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Comment from adewpearl
a new chapter - that always makes me happy :-)
and with his arms crossed, smiled - add comma
Even if THE never find the body, - they
Some people can relate to a moment OF uncontrollable rage - add OF
I show you the letters my Dad didn't want anyone to see - my dad
when she tried to runaway with Aunt Louise - run away - it's only one word as a noun - she is a runaway
Well, I guess it's time we find out WHAT your father didn't want anyone to know - add WHAT
Well,there is a cliff hanger, Valerie - stay healthy so you can post the next chapter before I die of curiosity :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 06-May-2011
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a new chapter - that always makes me happy :-)
and with his arms crossed, smiled - add comma
Even if THE never find the body, - they
Some people can relate to a moment OF uncontrollable rage - add OF
I show you the letters my Dad didn't want anyone to see - my dad
when she tried to runaway with Aunt Louise - run away - it's only one word as a noun - she is a runaway
Well, I guess it's time we find out WHAT your father didn't want anyone to know - add WHAT
Well,there is a cliff hanger, Valerie - stay healthy so you can post the next chapter before I die of curiosity :-) Brooke
Comment Written 06-May-2011
reply by the author on 06-May-2011
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Not that this has anything to do with anything, but yesterday I took my nighttime pills in the morning. They have my sleeping pills. I slept all day, then when it was time to go to bed I had to take them again....my brain is still a bit woozy...lol Glad you liked this one and thanks for catching the spags.
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You remind me of my sister - I help fill her pill box that has morning, lunch, evening and bedtime pill spaces, and she is forever forgetting to take the lunch pills :-)
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I have to laugh, I even have them in different colored bowls...but my brain was apparently somewhere else.
Comment from Gungalo
Wow!!! There's more, in the letters? Good grief this man was really something else, eh? Girl, you write this with such ease and it's really well done. I'm loving the mystery behind this whole story!! What an imagination you have!!!
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reply by the author on 06-May-2011
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Wow!!! There's more, in the letters? Good grief this man was really something else, eh? Girl, you write this with such ease and it's really well done. I'm loving the mystery behind this whole story!! What an imagination you have!!!
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Comment Written 06-May-2011
reply by the author on 06-May-2011
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Thanks so much, I am thrilled this is keeping your interest.
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Well there's a lot yet to know me thinks!!!