The Heir Apparent
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "When is Too Much Too Much?"A family learns their father is a serial killer
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Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is another great chaptper for your book, smurphgirl, i really enjoyed reading it, it was packed full of information, emotion and painful thoughts as james learns more about his father
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2011
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this is another great chaptper for your book, smurphgirl, i really enjoyed reading it, it was packed full of information, emotion and painful thoughts as james learns more about his father
Comment Written 19-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2011
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The scary part, is he's not done yet. Glad you liked this one.
Comment from Southern Writer
I don't find this confusing, I followed the story line. It is amazing how this tale has changed from the first attempt. Knowing that there is some true stories woven into this makes it even more interesting.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2011
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I don't find this confusing, I followed the story line. It is amazing how this tale has changed from the first attempt. Knowing that there is some true stories woven into this makes it even more interesting.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2011
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Actually the entire book is loosely based on a compilation of 5 real serial killers. Glad you are enjoying this.
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Ah, now you really have my interest. I can't admit it to just anyone, cause it is creepy,but serial killers are very interesting to me. You know we had two here, both are now in jail. One was sort of just a garden variety, but the other one...well I still can't believe there hasn't been a movie...there has been a really badly written book. Rumors that it might become a movie.
How's the Mexican breakfast club?
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It is doing fine. I have a couple of stories in the works, just haven't had much time to finish them.
Comment from RebelRose
Wow, girlfriend. You're right...this is very heavy chapter. Man, that whole family was sick and/or tormented. What a way to live. No wonder his mind was warped. Very well written chapter.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2011
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Wow, girlfriend. You're right...this is very heavy chapter. Man, that whole family was sick and/or tormented. What a way to live. No wonder his mind was warped. Very well written chapter.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2011
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Yup, sick and warped pretty much covers it. But James has a few tricks up his sleeve....one way or another he is determine to find out the whole truth.
Comment from adewpearl
typo - I couldn't tell IS she was serious or being sarcastic
typo - YOU father began acting strange
they were from Blaine, Washington - add the comma
Wow, that is some revelation from Dad as he is beating James' mother up
typo - died before YOU father was born
What a totally horrific story of James' father's life - no wonder the man went batshit crazy.
Oh, that ending has given me chills - I hope you reveal the contents of those letters soon. Brooke
P.S. - it's not confusing to me.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2011
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typo - I couldn't tell IS she was serious or being sarcastic
typo - YOU father began acting strange
they were from Blaine, Washington - add the comma
Wow, that is some revelation from Dad as he is beating James' mother up
typo - died before YOU father was born
What a totally horrific story of James' father's life - no wonder the man went batshit crazy.
Oh, that ending has given me chills - I hope you reveal the contents of those letters soon. Brooke
P.S. - it's not confusing to me.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2011
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Thanks for catching the typos...Glad it wasn't confusing.
Comment from Deejharrington
I can understand how James feels. The need to know is great but the truth is sometimes harder to accept. Especially when it is such a horror story. On top of knowing these people are your relatives. Very well written. I wonder if he will tell Mac everything?
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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2011
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I can understand how James feels. The need to know is great but the truth is sometimes harder to accept. Especially when it is such a horror story. On top of knowing these people are your relatives. Very well written. I wonder if he will tell Mac everything?
deb
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2011
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Just between you and me, yes, eventually....he needs a little time to digest everything first.
Comment from animatqua
This continues to be tense and fast paced (although too slow in posting for my eager mind!). One keeps thinking, "How much worse can it get?"
But, like watching two trains about to collide, the reader just doesn't seem to be able to take their eyes away.
Wonderful work!
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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2011
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This continues to be tense and fast paced (although too slow in posting for my eager mind!). One keeps thinking, "How much worse can it get?"
But, like watching two trains about to collide, the reader just doesn't seem to be able to take their eyes away.
Wonderful work!
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2011
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Sorry you have to wait so long... have a tendency to keep changing the chapters. I'll try to be a little quicker. Glad you liked this one.