The Heir Apparent
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Some Things Are Best Left Alone"A family learns their father is a serial killer
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have a feeling either Jame's granfather or father killsed the sister/mother. I never expected that one. Good job.
I paused long enough for my comment to sink in before continuing. "What troubles me most, is there is even less information on his sister. It is as though she never existed." (comma after continuing)
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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2011
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I have a feeling either Jame's granfather or father killsed the sister/mother. I never expected that one. Good job.
I paused long enough for my comment to sink in before continuing. "What troubles me most, is there is even less information on his sister. It is as though she never existed." (comma after continuing)
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Comment Written 07-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2011
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Thanks for catching the spag. There is lots more to come, poor James has too many unanswered questions to leave this one alone.