Stealing Thunder
An underdog tail ...32 total reviews
Comment from c_lucas
This is a victory for "the weaker sex," (LOL) I enjoyed your short story. You put me right in the middle of the race. Very good imagery.
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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2011
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This is a victory for "the weaker sex," (LOL) I enjoyed your short story. You put me right in the middle of the race. Very good imagery.
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2011
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Hi Charlie! Thanks! I couldn't resist a happy ending with this one! ") Thank you again ... ! Susan
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You're welcome, Susan. Charlie
Comment from animatqua
Yes! You started this with a great first paragraph, a real jolt that pulled me right into the story. The action continued to be fast paced and engaging. The ending was perfect.
And all in such a short write. This is really very good.
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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2011
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Yes! You started this with a great first paragraph, a real jolt that pulled me right into the story. The action continued to be fast paced and engaging. The ending was perfect.
And all in such a short write. This is really very good.
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2011
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Hi there! Thank you!! What a great review! I am honored to have you read this for me and such encouragment is so helpful!! I really appreciate this! Susan