Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "The Golden Treasure"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
56 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
You pick lovely artwork to go with your marvelous poem.
I love and believe every word you wrote is from your heart. I also sense you have a close relationship with the Lord to be able to write these caring uplifting words. All I can say is The God of love and peace will always be with you.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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You pick lovely artwork to go with your marvelous poem.
I love and believe every word you wrote is from your heart. I also sense you have a close relationship with the Lord to be able to write these caring uplifting words. All I can say is The God of love and peace will always be with you.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Thank you Misscookie for your beautiful and encouraging review and for your prayer. I really appreciate it. Sarah
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Your very welcome, take care.
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Your very welcome, take care.
Comment from sweetthanesue
ice sweet flowing and spiritually uplifting writing.
"be faithful now my dearest love
to he heavenly sunshine from above
treasure your faith above all else
in your heart God's love still dwells"
well expressed verse pic is colourful too
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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ice sweet flowing and spiritually uplifting writing.
"be faithful now my dearest love
to he heavenly sunshine from above
treasure your faith above all else
in your heart God's love still dwells"
well expressed verse pic is colourful too
Comment Written 12-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Thank you so much for your encouraging and uplifting review about my poem. I am greatly honoured. Sarah
Comment from Matoshka
I enjoyed your poem very much. It sends a message of love and hope. I loved your picture and the way your words just flowed. These words stood out to me. Great writing and blessings.
But greater is He that dwells in you
the King of glory, lovely and true.
The glory of Love and inner peace,
give your heart a sweet release.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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I enjoyed your poem very much. It sends a message of love and hope. I loved your picture and the way your words just flowed. These words stood out to me. Great writing and blessings.
But greater is He that dwells in you
the King of glory, lovely and true.
The glory of Love and inner peace,
give your heart a sweet release.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Thank you Matoshka for your heartfelt review of my poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it. With appreciation, Sarah
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You are so welcome Sarah. It was a joy to read. Blessings
Comment from CodyJack
The artwork you used goes very well with this. This poem is so full of imagery and truth. Very well written and I enjoyed reading this about God. You did a great job. Your friend, Cody
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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The artwork you used goes very well with this. This poem is so full of imagery and truth. Very well written and I enjoyed reading this about God. You did a great job. Your friend, Cody
Comment Written 12-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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Thank you Cody Jack for your great review about my poem, and I'm glad you enjoyed reading about God, the Spirit of Love itself, thank you for your friendship, Sarah
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written with good form and good flow, a great message to all of us, be faithful to Him who created us and our true treasure lies in Heaven, i really enjoyed reading this
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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this is very well written with good form and good flow, a great message to all of us, be faithful to Him who created us and our true treasure lies in Heaven, i really enjoyed reading this
Comment Written 12-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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Thank you sweetwoodjax for such an encouraging and uplifting review. Really appreciate it.
Comment from chrissy8
You have written some very nice quatrains! I would like to know what exactly the golden treasure is but I assume you are leaving that up to the reader? Very nice. Keep writing!!!
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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You have written some very nice quatrains! I would like to know what exactly the golden treasure is but I assume you are leaving that up to the reader? Very nice. Keep writing!!!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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Thank you christinasimms for asking me this question but "golden treasure" in this case represents God's presence living within us even in the shadows. "I'll never leave you nor forsake you." Also thank you for your encouraging review. Sarah
Comment from Minglement
Wow, this is a very evocative piece, well expressing your spiritual beliefs. Very uplfiting poem with great presentation and artwork. Well done.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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Wow, this is a very evocative piece, well expressing your spiritual beliefs. Very uplfiting poem with great presentation and artwork. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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I guess so Minglement, there's a lot in there, and I'm glad you find my poem uplifting and well presented. Many thank's for your great review.
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You're very welcome. Marcia
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Hi Sara,
I enjoyed reading your lovely poem and agree that the real golden treasure is found within. "Life is not just a fantasy land, a playground on a golden strand. For wherever we go, we leave a trend, that follows us to the very end." Wonderful message. Well done! Warm greetings,
W ^-^
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Hi Sara,
I enjoyed reading your lovely poem and agree that the real golden treasure is found within. "Life is not just a fantasy land, a playground on a golden strand. For wherever we go, we leave a trend, that follows us to the very end." Wonderful message. Well done! Warm greetings,
W ^-^
Comment Written 12-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Thank you for you beautiful and encouraging review of my poem, I'm glad you enjoyed it. With appreciation, Sarah
Comment from Ntorious
The picture is colorful and a good choice to compliment the poem.
I like the flow of the poem and the rhyming used.
While reading it I felt peace, love and joy.
You provided a speacial warmth and happines.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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The picture is colorful and a good choice to compliment the poem.
I like the flow of the poem and the rhyming used.
While reading it I felt peace, love and joy.
You provided a speacial warmth and happines.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Thank you so much for your encouraging and uplifting review of my poem. I'm so glad you liked reading it especially that it gave you joy and peace filled with love. With appreciation, Sarah
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you are welcome and I did enjoy.
Comment from nancyr490
Absolutely beautiful and inspirational! All the words flow so smoothly and the 3rd and 5th stanzas are makes a really strong statement incorporating it with the whole powerful message of the poem. Excellent job.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Absolutely beautiful and inspirational! All the words flow so smoothly and the 3rd and 5th stanzas are makes a really strong statement incorporating it with the whole powerful message of the poem. Excellent job.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Thank you so much for your beautiful and encouraging review of my poem. With a appreciation, Sarah