Short Stories
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Comment from hotstuff
This is a lovely light hearted story, that was fun to read.
I thoroughly enjoyed it. Your imagination and flair for writing short stories is great. I always look forward to your posting. Keep it up.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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This is a lovely light hearted story, that was fun to read.
I thoroughly enjoyed it. Your imagination and flair for writing short stories is great. I always look forward to your posting. Keep it up.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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hotstuff,
A belated but deeply felt thank you...Smiles, Carol
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Carol,
This is a great story and one I thoroughly enjoyed. Can you imagine saying those things and not knowing who was in the next stall? Well...it turned out well for the two girls and I imagine they were never able to convince their friends it actually happened. Delightful story and good luck in the contest. Blessings, chey
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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Hi Carol,
This is a great story and one I thoroughly enjoyed. Can you imagine saying those things and not knowing who was in the next stall? Well...it turned out well for the two girls and I imagine they were never able to convince their friends it actually happened. Delightful story and good luck in the contest. Blessings, chey
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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Chey,
A belated but deeply felt thank you...Smiles, Carol
Comment from dmjones
That definitely would be a meeting of a lifetime. I liked the conversation Amy had in the bathroom. It was so funny. Well done.
a couple of things to check:
times to (do instead of to)I have to tell you that none of that stuff is ever true."
but his professionalism reared its head and that's all the further it went."(this seems a little awkward at the end. Maybe ...and that's as far as it went?)
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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That definitely would be a meeting of a lifetime. I liked the conversation Amy had in the bathroom. It was so funny. Well done.
a couple of things to check:
times to (do instead of to)I have to tell you that none of that stuff is ever true."
but his professionalism reared its head and that's all the further it went."(this seems a little awkward at the end. Maybe ...and that's as far as it went?)
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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dONNA,
A belated but deeply felt thank you...Smiles, Carol
Comment from acvguard11
i like this and i really like the picture that you put with it..it really adds to the meaning...great job and keep writing....good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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i like this and i really like the picture that you put with it..it really adds to the meaning...great job and keep writing....good luck in the contest
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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Thank you so much for enjoying my story...Carol
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is great, i enjoyed reading this very much, it gave me a laugh and i am still smiling. i should have known it was something you came up with. i wish you the best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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this is great, i enjoyed reading this very much, it gave me a laugh and i am still smiling. i should have known it was something you came up with. i wish you the best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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sweetwoodjax,
Life still has me in a strangle hold but I hope to be back soon. Thank you for enjoying my work and the continued encouragement. Smiles, CArol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You have written a very cute, fun short story. I enjoyed reading it. It has all the required elements, good plot, fun strong characters, and the dialogue moved the plot along at a good pace.
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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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You have written a very cute, fun short story. I enjoyed reading it. It has all the required elements, good plot, fun strong characters, and the dialogue moved the plot along at a good pace.
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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Barbara,
Life still has me in a strangle hold but I hope to be back soon. Thank you for enjoying my work and the continued encouragement. Smiles, CArol
Comment from eliz100
What a great, timely story. It was a good read from beginning to end. I love the twist at the end. It definitely brought a smile to my face.
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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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What a great, timely story. It was a good read from beginning to end. I love the twist at the end. It definitely brought a smile to my face.
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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Eliz,
Life still has me in a strangle hold but I hope to be back soon. Thank you for enjoying my work and the continued encouragement. Smiles, CArol