Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Chapter 3 Part three"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from RKagan
I love the characters you are creating with this book. You have built a great foundation and you keep me wanting to read more. I think that every woman wishes she had a Joe in her life and that will make this book very sellable. good job
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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I love the characters you are creating with this book. You have built a great foundation and you keep me wanting to read more. I think that every woman wishes she had a Joe in her life and that will make this book very sellable. good job
Comment Written 23-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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Thank you, Joe is not perfect, but darn close. Thank you for you kind review.
Comment from lgm859
A sad touching story of a young woman's pain and yet to have a miracle came out of a embarrassing moment.
Young woman should be aware of things like this. having to write stores will give then the warnings to be cautious.
Improvenments: None.
Well done. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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A sad touching story of a young woman's pain and yet to have a miracle came out of a embarrassing moment.
Young woman should be aware of things like this. having to write stores will give then the warnings to be cautious.
Improvenments: None.
Well done. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your support.
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you're welcome.
Comment from gramalot8
Barbara, I'm surprised they let her keep her homecoming title and didn't strip her of it. I loved how Joe took care of Roy and how special he always make Sara feel.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2010
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Barbara, I'm surprised they let her keep her homecoming title and didn't strip her of it. I loved how Joe took care of Roy and how special he always make Sara feel.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your support,
Comment from Tellis
Another great chapter and I wonder if there's an expiration date on date rape. I would like to have the guy arrested who did this. Keep up the great work.
Tellis
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2010
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Another great chapter and I wonder if there's an expiration date on date rape. I would like to have the guy arrested who did this. Keep up the great work.
Tellis
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2010
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All of that will come out later. Thank you for your kind review. I am sorry you got hit by a newbie the other day. You didn't deserve it.
Comment from Readywriter52
Sara has told Joe how she got pregnant. Now he wonders which of the men in the class got her pregnant. He shows how much he likes her when he refuses to listen to gossip about her.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2010
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Sara has told Joe how she got pregnant. Now he wonders which of the men in the class got her pregnant. He shows how much he likes her when he refuses to listen to gossip about her.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your continued support.
Comment from marcii
So like a reunion, usually something happens,even if its not a major thing, Although I did go to my own and nothing bad happened, so now I've contradicted myself.
The story is continuing well.
The characters are getting to me,I like them very much.
Marcii
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2010
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So like a reunion, usually something happens,even if its not a major thing, Although I did go to my own and nothing bad happened, so now I've contradicted myself.
The story is continuing well.
The characters are getting to me,I like them very much.
Marcii
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I live too far away to go back for any reunions. That may be a good thing.
Comment from fictionwriter
Seems you've introduced us to the jerk who might be the father of the baby. He's the only one calloused enough to act that way. Great job.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2010
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Seems you've introduced us to the jerk who might be the father of the baby. He's the only one calloused enough to act that way. Great job.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. We shall see in a later chapter, who Cassie's father is.
Comment from Hanna Marie
Very well done. You had me interested from the beginning. What a horrible thing to happen to the young gal. I wonder how many times things like that really do happen? Good job. Have a great weekend. Hanna
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2010
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Very well done. You had me interested from the beginning. What a horrible thing to happen to the young gal. I wonder how many times things like that really do happen? Good job. Have a great weekend. Hanna
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2010
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I have a feeling in small towns more often that we care to admit. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from L.lora
I truly like the way
you've handled this
addition/situation. Excellent
writing with great descriptions
and a real depth of emotion.
Very realistic in scenarios and
dialogues. I applaud you for
taking the stance you have with
this delicate subject. no nits or
spags. Lora
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2010
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I truly like the way
you've handled this
addition/situation. Excellent
writing with great descriptions
and a real depth of emotion.
Very realistic in scenarios and
dialogues. I applaud you for
taking the stance you have with
this delicate subject. no nits or
spags. Lora
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from robbis4
The second chapter vive read and the story captivates me once again , the story unfolding the venerability displayed only adding to the developing bond between the two but with a promise of dark difficult times ahead , great characters wonderful writing thank you bob
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2010
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The second chapter vive read and the story captivates me once again , the story unfolding the venerability displayed only adding to the developing bond between the two but with a promise of dark difficult times ahead , great characters wonderful writing thank you bob
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
