Flash Fiction
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Afraid of the Dark"Collection of Flash, Micro, etc.
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Comment from Trybuck
One-eyed Fred to the rescue
Those bed monsters become bar-b-que
When Fred says run, they shoo
Not much else they can do
When One-eyed Fred comes to the rescue
Well done, Buck
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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One-eyed Fred to the rescue
Those bed monsters become bar-b-que
When Fred says run, they shoo
Not much else they can do
When One-eyed Fred comes to the rescue
Well done, Buck
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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Buck,
Thanks for the chuckle...I love it!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Isaiah Ramesses
Nice flash. I found the story to be an adorable read, B.A. One issue:
"There's nothing to be afraid of, Son.">>can't see the significance of "son" being capped here.
Other than that this is very good.
Isaiah Ramesses
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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Nice flash. I found the story to be an adorable read, B.A. One issue:
"There's nothing to be afraid of, Son.">>can't see the significance of "son" being capped here.
Other than that this is very good.
Isaiah Ramesses
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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Isaiah,
Using Son in place of his proper name...Thanks for the kind review. Crol
Comment from djsignal2008
That is a cute story. Do you write a lot of children books because this could be one to be published. Thanks for bringing out stories that bring peace to the world.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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That is a cute story. Do you write a lot of children books because this could be one to be published. Thanks for bringing out stories that bring peace to the world.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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I enjoy writing simple things for children but have never concentrated on just children's books. Thanks for the encouragement. Smiles, CArol
Comment from anabellapongasi
Hi Carol,
A very nice flash fiction. A heartwarming little story in very few words. You did a great job. I enjoyed reading this.
Anabella
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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Hi Carol,
A very nice flash fiction. A heartwarming little story in very few words. You did a great job. I enjoyed reading this.
Anabella
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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Anabella,
Thank you so much for the kind words and I apologize for my tardiness in replying...LIfe owns me these days and so little time is spent on pleasure. Smiles, Carol
Comment from menachem
honestly, I always thought it was the other way around: WE can't create a world for children, any more than we can take it away. I mean, isn't the kid always in charge?
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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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honestly, I always thought it was the other way around: WE can't create a world for children, any more than we can take it away. I mean, isn't the kid always in charge?
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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menachem,
Sometimes it feels that way...Thanks for the review. Carol
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Yup!
You're welcome!
Comment from Belinda
It's amazing how you get inspirations as if instantly. This is another from Suneagle's contest, right? I would never have thought of a cuddly monster, Carol... Lovely story.
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It's amazing how you get inspirations as if instantly. This is another from Suneagle's contest, right? I would never have thought of a cuddly monster, Carol... Lovely story.
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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Belinda,
My son cherished his cuddly monster for years. Bought another at a garage sale just for the memories. Thank you..Smiles, Carol
