Flash Fiction
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Comment from Gideon Roth
Hi there. With just 105 words you managed to convey the best mental picture of an event that many of us dog lovers have endured from time to time. Well done on this and I will look for your future submissions...Tim, aka, Gideon
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Hi there. With just 105 words you managed to convey the best mental picture of an event that many of us dog lovers have endured from time to time. Well done on this and I will look for your future submissions...Tim, aka, Gideon
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
Comment from Ann Smith
Oh my how devious. I believe if you had entered the contest this might would have won. This story not only is devious, but sneaky. The details are good, and I can smell the pies. As always there's not a wasted word. ann
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Oh my how devious. I believe if you had entered the contest this might would have won. This story not only is devious, but sneaky. The details are good, and I can smell the pies. As always there's not a wasted word. ann
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Begin, and
'Goodbye' to those delicious pies what a great closure to your hilarious prompt.
The hungry canine seized his opportunity. Dinner was waiting.
Gert
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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Hello Begin, and
'Goodbye' to those delicious pies what a great closure to your hilarious prompt.
The hungry canine seized his opportunity. Dinner was waiting.
Gert
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Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Gert,
Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
Comment from c_lucas
The hungry canine will end of with its throat's cuts. This is very well written with very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good job.
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The hungry canine will end of with its throat's cuts. This is very well written with very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good job.
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Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
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You're welcome, Carol. Chralie
