Flash Fiction
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "The Winning Ticket"Collection of Flash, Micro, etc.
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Comment from Charlene0513
To Begin Again,
A micro-fiction story which describes the luck that one holds when they keep hoping their lives will take that unexpected twist.
Nice job! You kept the momentum going and that's what counts.
Charlene
reply by the author on 11-May-2010
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To Begin Again,
A micro-fiction story which describes the luck that one holds when they keep hoping their lives will take that unexpected twist.
Nice job! You kept the momentum going and that's what counts.
Charlene
Comment Written 11-May-2010
reply by the author on 11-May-2010
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Charlene,
It's difficult for me to cut back my words..I'm an old lady with a lot of hot air, I guess. But I'm working on it. Thanks for enjoying the micro story. Smiles, Carol
Comment from RebelRose
Cute story. I guess she won after all. Of course, I'd rather have the millions but dinner and dancing ain't bad, LOL. Well done.
reply by the author on 11-May-2010
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Cute story. I guess she won after all. Of course, I'd rather have the millions but dinner and dancing ain't bad, LOL. Well done.
Comment Written 11-May-2010
reply by the author on 11-May-2010
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Patty,
Glad you enjoyed this little flash in the pan. Smiles, Carol
Comment from jl & bandit
This is really creative... I sure like the way you twist things up.
Its too bad this didnt make it into the contest I would have voted for it !
JL&B
reply by the author on 11-May-2010
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This is really creative... I sure like the way you twist things up.
Its too bad this didnt make it into the contest I would have voted for it !
JL&B
Comment Written 11-May-2010
reply by the author on 11-May-2010
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jl & bandit,
Thank you for the vote of confidence. I struggle with these short blips but I like the challenge. Glad you do too! Smiles, Carol
Comment from adewpearl
I like the flirtatious playfulness of your story - great dialogue, fun ending, an uplifting take on how winning doesn't always involve getting what we originally wished for :-) Brooke
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reply by the author on 11-May-2010
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I like the flirtatious playfulness of your story - great dialogue, fun ending, an uplifting take on how winning doesn't always involve getting what we originally wished for :-) Brooke
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Comment Written 11-May-2010
reply by the author on 11-May-2010
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Brooke,
Glad you caught the message I was trying to relay. Appreciate the kind review. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Belinda
A date with caramel eyes? Who would say no? And who would give the chance to the elderly woman? Not you. Interesting micro fiction, Carol.
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A date with caramel eyes? Who would say no? And who would give the chance to the elderly woman? Not you. Interesting micro fiction, Carol.
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Comment Written 11-May-2010
reply by the author on 11-May-2010
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Belinda,
Hey, every girl for themselves..especially since I'm the elderly lady. lol Thanks for the kind review. Carol
