The Steep Price
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Good day author
what a sad and powerful poem of what war can do to anyone
Excellent break and nice rhyme within your poem.
Gert
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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Good day author
what a sad and powerful poem of what war can do to anyone
Excellent break and nice rhyme within your poem.
Gert
Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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Gert Sherwood, thank you so very very much I appreciate you..
Comment from mermaids
You paint a picture of how war can change a soldier and life is never the same. You have a great flow of verses and words and tell a story here.
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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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You paint a picture of how war can change a soldier and life is never the same. You have a great flow of verses and words and tell a story here.
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Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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mermaids, thank you so very very much.