Ex-Wife's Outfits
Daughter plays Mom.34 total reviews
Comment from allie0925
Thesis,
I really like how you handled the theme of this story. I especially love how you show that the teenager became the adult in this situation and simply took the lead and handled the situation.
Good flow and story telling and thanks for sharing.
Allie
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2010
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Thesis,
I really like how you handled the theme of this story. I especially love how you show that the teenager became the adult in this situation and simply took the lead and handled the situation.
Good flow and story telling and thanks for sharing.
Allie
Comment Written 21-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2010
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Thanks, Allie. Teens tell it like it is, not always what we want to hear. - John
Comment from prophetess
Good job Thesis. I have to admit though I like showing off the girls occasionally, but yes there are limits and boundaries. I like thia story.
Prophetess
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2010
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Good job Thesis. I have to admit though I like showing off the girls occasionally, but yes there are limits and boundaries. I like thia story.
Prophetess
Comment Written 21-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2010
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WooHoo! And seriously, we men do appreciate that. But, even I agree (I can't believe I'm saying this, lol) there is a time and a place. - John
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Lol! yeah, you know you'd be like the guy in the story and not really want to say anything. Lol! MEN!!! :)
Comment from anabelle
It must have been some dress to create such a scene and to cause Ronnie to cry over having her daughter telling her she looked like a slut. Whew! Glad I don't live in that house. ;-0
Best of luck in the contest.
Regards, anabelle
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2010
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It must have been some dress to create such a scene and to cause Ronnie to cry over having her daughter telling her she looked like a slut. Whew! Glad I don't live in that house. ;-0
Best of luck in the contest.
Regards, anabelle
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2010
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Lol. Yes, it looks like one wrong move and the girls go free. I think the daughter made a good call on that one. - John
Comment from RazberryBullet
Does seeing her popping out of her dress, bring you fond memories?" (She's sure 'popping out' in the picture!!!)...
Becky's one smart kid :) I hope I didn't say the wrong thing, but I told her I'd be pissed if I were you."
Well done!
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2010
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Does seeing her popping out of her dress, bring you fond memories?" (She's sure 'popping out' in the picture!!!)...
Becky's one smart kid :) I hope I didn't say the wrong thing, but I told her I'd be pissed if I were you."
Well done!
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2010
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Hi Razz. Yeah, she's about to set the girls free. I wanted to have the voice of reason come from the daughter. Teenagers will always tell you like it is, even when you don't want to hear it. - John
