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Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "A Touch of Green!"Collection of Flash, Micro, etc.
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Comment from Sharesy
This was a fun read, Carol. Young people who worry about getting old annoy me too. Hattie's response to them was cute. Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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This was a fun read, Carol. Young people who worry about getting old annoy me too. Hattie's response to them was cute. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Sharesy
Thanks for stopping by to read this little bit of flash...It was fun to write and I might try one or two more. Smiles to you, Carol
Comment from L.lora
Now Hattie sounds like
quite a lady, one worth
knowing. Love the sense
of humor and oh so glad
the character couldn't
refuse making a statement.
no nits or spags... Lora
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Now Hattie sounds like
quite a lady, one worth
knowing. Love the sense
of humor and oh so glad
the character couldn't
refuse making a statement.
no nits or spags... Lora
Comment Written 14-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Lora,
A bit like the writer, I think! Thanks for the kind comments...Smiles to you, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is too cute for words. I enjoyed reading it and laughed throughout. Another great job, by a great lady. I found no mechanical errors. I just rechecked your senior citizen classfication. Aren't we in the same age range?
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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This is too cute for words. I enjoyed reading it and laughed throughout. Another great job, by a great lady. I found no mechanical errors. I just rechecked your senior citizen classfication. Aren't we in the same age range?
Comment Written 14-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Barbara,
My baby boy is 27 and yours is in high school. I fear I'm the Great Grandmother in this little group. Turning a blushing 62 in September...they say I'm preserved well! LOL Smiles, Carol
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My oldest will be 32 in July. I'm 56, so you're not that much older.
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My oldest, Johnny, will be 42 on July 21st...I can't believe it! Smiles, Carol
Comment from Frankeddy
Boy, It is great to read a good humorous story.You have certainly made that
possible. The animation just sets the scene perfect.
Very well done. Love the sense of humor.
Very good. Frankeddy
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Boy, It is great to read a good humorous story.You have certainly made that
possible. The animation just sets the scene perfect.
Very well done. Love the sense of humor.
Very good. Frankeddy
Comment Written 14-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Frankeddy
Thank you so much...I'm like the old lady..I entered one story in the contest and then the funny one popped into my head..just a bit too late. Glad you enjoyed. Smiles, Carol
Comment from misscookie
Oh boy. this is a winner I remeber back in the say it hit me the bar was changing. it wasn't the bar it was the age of people now coming to it. because people my aga was fading out.
you hit this one right on the nose.
this is a good write
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Oh boy. this is a winner I remeber back in the say it hit me the bar was changing. it wasn't the bar it was the age of people now coming to it. because people my aga was fading out.
you hit this one right on the nose.
this is a good write
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Comment Written 14-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Cookie,
My honey tells me I need a 55 gallon barrel of that Clariol to keep away the gray, but my body still wouldn't let me dance the night away. Smiles, Carol
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your too mudh I gotone my honey use to tell me..."I remember I use to wrapmy srms around you waist."
I would say. "And I remember I use to lay on your chest, now I need pillows. Ain't love grand.
Comment from jadapenn
Hahaha, blame it on the Bosanova or whatever. Here I guess it would be the Creme de Menthe and Irish Whiskey. I loved this. The last line is priceless. Where did all the young boys go???
You've made my day. luv jada
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Hahaha, blame it on the Bosanova or whatever. Here I guess it would be the Creme de Menthe and Irish Whiskey. I loved this. The last line is priceless. Where did all the young boys go???
You've made my day. luv jada
Comment Written 14-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Jada,
Wished I would have thought of this one before I entered the other one in the contest..Oh well, I had fun and you did too!
Thanks for the smiles and dusting of stars ...Luv ya, Carol
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A great pleasure. j
Comment from harleyangelbrat
Although a non-drinker and hater of alcohol, this is very cute and funny. The picture is really funny and goes well with the poem. It is not my usual type of poem, but it turned out very funny. Good work! God bless.
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Although a non-drinker and hater of alcohol, this is very cute and funny. The picture is really funny and goes well with the poem. It is not my usual type of poem, but it turned out very funny. Good work! God bless.
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Comment Written 14-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Harleyangelbrat,,,
If I have a glass of wine in a year..it's rare too! But I simply couldn't resist the old lady and her humor. Smiles, Carol
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I know, it was funny. Hope you have a great week. God bless. Marilyn
