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Comment from chaswriter
Carol - This is a fun flash fiction story. The little girl sure did know how to trick the teacher by hiding the green beans. Well written.
Charlie
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Carol - This is a fun flash fiction story. The little girl sure did know how to trick the teacher by hiding the green beans. Well written.
Charlie
Comment Written 02-Feb-2010
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Charlie
Yes, and I had to keep a straight face while the teacher explained to me how unacceptable her actions were...Smiles, Carol
Comment from words
Enjoyed your cherry write.
So glad the children got their ice cream ... however, it was earned.
Got quite a giggle out of
:A continuous string of green beans lined the small ledge under the table.
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Enjoyed your cherry write.
So glad the children got their ice cream ... however, it was earned.
Got quite a giggle out of
:A continuous string of green beans lined the small ledge under the table.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2010
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Words,
Might daughter was quite the clever one back then...when her kids do something now and she complains...I just laugh...Thanks for the comments. Carol
Comment from RebelRose
This is a really cute story. Sometimes you just cannot outsmart those little ones. They can be very resourceful when it becomes necessary.
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This is a really cute story. Sometimes you just cannot outsmart those little ones. They can be very resourceful when it becomes necessary.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2010
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Patty
Yes...this one especially...Always had me guessing. Thanks for the kind comments...Carol
Comment from BarnCat
Fun and tasty read, Carol. Loved Wendy's problem solving skills! You created a great flash fiction piece, even if it was a bit long for the contest. Have you tried Twit-Lit? Write a short short story in 140 characters. If anyone can do it, you can! Great job here, Deb
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Fun and tasty read, Carol. Loved Wendy's problem solving skills! You created a great flash fiction piece, even if it was a bit long for the contest. Have you tried Twit-Lit? Write a short short story in 140 characters. If anyone can do it, you can! Great job here, Deb
Comment Written 02-Feb-2010
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Deb
Thanks for all the encouragement. I am thrilled that this story was enjoyed. She'll graduate with her master's degree this summer. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Blue Danube
LOL.
Thanks for the cute story, Carol.
I could not figure out how "Wendy" might get out of eating the green beans but now I know.
Have you ever done anything like that? :~)
Much enjoyed!
Blue
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LOL.
Thanks for the cute story, Carol.
I could not figure out how "Wendy" might get out of eating the green beans but now I know.
Have you ever done anything like that? :~)
Much enjoyed!
Blue
Comment Written 02-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2010
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Blue
She still doesn't eat green beans and she's 39 years old. Smiles, Carol
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Hmm...I would never refuse a good green bean (topped with fried onions) casserole.
Yummy.
Smiles back to you.
Blue
Comment from BethShelby
This is cute. Those adorable litte tykes learn how to be sneaky early. I've seen them on Funniest Home Vidios hiding their vegetables and hoping no one is looking. I remember hating green beans myself but I like them now.
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This is cute. Those adorable litte tykes learn how to be sneaky early. I've seen them on Funniest Home Vidios hiding their vegetables and hoping no one is looking. I remember hating green beans myself but I like them now.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2010
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Beth
Not a lover of very much cooked vegetables so I couldn't help but laugh when the teacher told me what she'd done...Thanks for the kind review...Carol
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Carol,
smiles.
A switch for you a real short cute story.
I liked it to tell you the truth I figured smart little Wendy, knew how to outsmart the teacher.
Gert
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Hello Carol,
smiles.
A switch for you a real short cute story.
I liked it to tell you the truth I figured smart little Wendy, knew how to outsmart the teacher.
Gert
Comment Written 02-Feb-2010
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Gert
It was a long time ago, but I still remember how I struggled to keep a straight face as the teacher explained what she'd done...Thanks for the wonderful review...Carol
Comment from misscookie
I loved it I could justsee the faces of the little ones
once they found out what they had to do to get a treat
See Iwould never have that problem for I love vegetables.
this is a cute little piece of work.
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I loved it I could justsee the faces of the little ones
once they found out what they had to do to get a treat
See Iwould never have that problem for I love vegetables.
this is a cute little piece of work.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2010
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Cookie
Thanks for the wonderful review and for enjoying the story. Carol
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my pleaseure,have a nice day.