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The Writer's Path

Once upon a time I decided to write......

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Comment from BarnCat
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This was fun and rollicking and your use of site references enhanced the personal feel of it. You write in a very appealing off-handed way tht makes me feel we are engaged in conversation over a cup of coffee. Keep the pot on, I'll be back. Deb

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2010


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    Deb

    That was one of the greatest things anyone could have said to me. I am thrilled that you felt part of me and what I was writing. The pot will always be on...stop by any time. CArol
Comment from Authoroni
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Begin Again: Just read your, The Writer's Path, Once Upon A Time...... a writing prompt entry.

As a getting-back-in-the-writing-saddle, this came as a pleasant surprise. I found it an easy-to-read discourse that enlightened me on who's who.

Very informative, Good job, well done!

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2010


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2010
    Well, welcome back and thank you for reading my wacky story today. I appreciate it very much. CArol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Well, this a great short story. I guess all of your muses, left and come to visit you for 2010. That's a scary thought. Now what are we going to do for the rest of the year. Can you send them home? Love ya, girlfriend.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2010


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    Barbara

    I have know idea where all this wacky stuff is coming from but I am certainly having fun. Thanks for the review. Carol
Comment from Writeaway...
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Great job Begin Again, you started out probably how every writer starts off when writing a story or novel, hmm, oh darn, ha, ha. I found no spags whatsoever and was kept interested from the beginning, excellent job, keep writing!!

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    Jake Thanks so much for enjoying the wacky story. I always appreciate your comments. Smiles, Carol
Comment from jadapenn
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You are a real loony at times. This was actually a good bit of humour at the start of the year. So, at least you're trying not to step on everybodies toes. I have some good port for those muses of yours. Send them to Jo'burg for a night of hilarity and I guarantee you'll come up with something good like Gerald from Ireland does. Man he makes my belly ache with laughter.
Well done. Luved it and you. luv jada

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2010


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2010
    Jada

    I forgot I had to pay for the contest and then to enter and discovered I was out of money..sorry you read it so quickly without getting paid your due. But I am glad you enjoyed it. Smiles, Carol
reply by jadapenn on 02-Jan-2010
    Are you tricking me!
Comment from RebelRose
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Boy, you surely seem to know your fellow writers very well. I did recognize almost every one you mentioned. some of them are my favorites. This is a very unusual read.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2010


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    Patty

    Yes, it is...I hope it at least made you chuckle once or twice. I have no idea where these weird stories are coming from..Must be that pack of new muses that moved in. Thank you very much...Carol
Comment from jayesnb
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Simultaneously, four (messaged) popped up... messages
You touched on everything in this story. The smile on my face grew as each genre was listed an dismissed. Not what I was expecting at all. An extremely pleasant surprise. great job.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2010


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    jayesnb

    I hope I made you laugh if only for a moment. Thank you for the wonderful review and catching that missed letter. I appreciate it as always. Carol
Comment from dmjones
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Hi Carol, This is very funny and creative. I enjoyed reading it. I don't know how you can write so fast. I've been working on one chapter of my book for 5 days now. Good luck in this contest.

One thing to check:
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Oh, yeah, why not develop your own contest:)

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 Comment Written 02-Jan-2010


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    Donna

    Caught that one as I was rereading..Thanks! When a story pops..it seems to just spill out of me like this one did this morning. Hope it gave you a chuckle, Carol
Comment from missy98writer
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Carol,
Another fantastic fiction story from you. It looks like your on a roll today. I loved the art work you used. The descriptive scheme is well executed. Great use of Margaret and Brooke. No poet or writer can match their brilliance. I like how you mentioned Jada and her romance book about Jake and Jess. Thanks for mentioning me, John, Lynn and Lola where we got erotic covered. Don't you love Barbara's book about Steven and Leya.
Great job for the prompt. This gets my "freaking awesome" award and my vote for the best I've read so far. Great tributes.
Melissa.

Remember a dirty mind is a terrible thing to waste.

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 Comment Written 02-Jan-2010


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    Melissa

    Thanks so much for the wonderful review. I hope it gave you a chuckle or two. Thanks for the gracious comments. Carol