Comment from Amfunny

Excellent

Very nicely done. I love the description you write. Great imagery. The picture reflects the words of your haiku perfectly. Good luck. Well done.

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Amfunny

I attempt poetry with a shiver (no pun intended) because I certainly am not a poet. I appreciate your encouragement. Smiles, Carol

reply by Amfunny on 21-Nov-2009

I thought it was excellent and my favorite so far.

Comment from Sally Carter

Excellent

I absolutely love this! The image of winter's wrath coming in icy breath, rather than hot, and the tears being frozen on the branches. Really stunning. Not much else to say than that! Good luck with it. Sally

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Sally

I shiver (no pun intended) every time I post a poem...I don't consider myself a poet by any standard so I appreciate the encouragement. Smiles to you, Carol

Comment from missy98writer

Excellent

Begin Again,
This is an excellent and well written haiku entitled "Weeping Trees".
I like the second line on this enjoyable haiku:
"winter's angry wrath".
This is a wonderful offering for the haiku contest. This haiku is five stars of frosty goodness.
Melissa.

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Melissa

Thank you so much...You know poetry isn't my thing, but I like to attempt it once in awhile. Thanks for the encouragement. Carol

Comment from RebelRose

Excellent

Hey, I really like this one. You painted a picture with your words. I liked the structure and imagery very much. A job well done.

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Rebelrose

I shiver (no pun intended) when I write poetry. Thanks for the encouragement. Carol

Comment from jadapenn

Excellent

You make me chilly with this angry weather poem. LOL. I loved the short poem which is so descriptive. You show how in one sweep the weather can move in and freeze everything in its way. Well presented.
Best wishes for the contest. luv jada

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Jada

Thanks for the encouragement. I always shiver (no pun intended) when I try and write poetry...way out of my comfort zone...just like the winter. LOL Thanks so much...Carol