POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES
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Comment from Belinda Amy Pantyboy
Have looked at the rules of this contest earlier on and after reading this can see the perfect way of writing in this style. Excellent subject matter and great artwork to go with it.Like the way it ends with a question. Very good luck with this.
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Have looked at the rules of this contest earlier on and after reading this can see the perfect way of writing in this style. Excellent subject matter and great artwork to go with it.Like the way it ends with a question. Very good luck with this.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
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Belinda
Appreciate the kind and considerate review. Too many people are unfairly judged because a prosecutor wants to make a name. Carol
Comment from Sasha
I have never heard of this style of poem before. Very interesting. You did a marvelous job with this and I just love the painting you use to illustrate it. Great entry for the contest and as always, I wish you all the best.
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I have never heard of this style of poem before. Very interesting. You did a marvelous job with this and I just love the painting you use to illustrate it. Great entry for the contest and as always, I wish you all the best.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
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Sash
I had not heard of it either but decided to give it a try. Much like a haiku but less syllables. Thanks for the review. Carol
Comment from RebelRose
You're a busy bee today. Two in a row I had from you. I liked this one. This happens so often in society. Of course, 99% of the criminals claim that it is unjust ... but there is always that 1%.
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You're a busy bee today. Two in a row I had from you. I liked this one. This happens so often in society. Of course, 99% of the criminals claim that it is unjust ... but there is always that 1%.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
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RebelRose
In our state, through DNA they found 13 innocent people on deathrow. That fact scares me to death. Prosecutors are so eager to make a name and solve a case that they often settle for less than they should. Thanks CArol
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I watch all the CSI, Cold Case, American Justice, etc. shows. I am so grateful that they now have DNA and I have seen documentaries where they have proven the innocence of men and women who have served many years that they will never get back. I even had a nightmare once that I was accused and I cried and begged them to believe my innocence. That is the most frustrating thing there is, to know you are innocent and not being able to prove it or win against lawyers out to make a name for themselves. So sad.
Comment from lola29
Carol, your poem is very potent with sentiments that have no doubt been yelled out by many innocent people. Wow! You really grabbed my attention. Bravo!
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Carol, your poem is very potent with sentiments that have no doubt been yelled out by many innocent people. Wow! You really grabbed my attention. Bravo!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
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Lola
I saw the picture and it just grabbed me. I wonder how many people turn away even when they know some one is being treated unjustly. Thanks for the review...Carol
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All those who are promoting their own self-worth.
You've entered a very thought provoking piece of work, and I hope
it stirs ohers to think about your message.
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Thank you...You are always a sweetheart...Special to my heart! Carol
Comment from misscookie
wow that picture tells it all you really pick a good picture for your wrie This so true there are countless people who are truly innocent behide bars.
very good write.
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wow that picture tells it all you really pick a good picture for your wrie This so true there are countless people who are truly innocent behide bars.
very good write.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
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Cookie
Thanks again for reading and reviewing. Too many people turn their heads when they know an injustice is being done. Carol
your welcome and so right
Comment from redglasses
It's me again. This one's terrific too. I haven't any sixes left - darn it. It appeals to my dark and cynical mind :-) You really should be getting paid for this stuff.
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It's me again. This one's terrific too. I haven't any sixes left - darn it. It appeals to my dark and cynical mind :-) You really should be getting paid for this stuff.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
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Redglasses
This one just popped out when I saw the picture...How many people would rather turn their heads than recognize an injustice. Thanks somuch! Carol
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Nothing you don't deserve. Red my lips, uh - type - You really should be getting paid.
Comment from AnnaLinda
Begin Again,
This is a very powerful Lune poem! Oh My! It is very intense! Those words certainly do reflect the rage that one would feel in those circumstances! That picture that you have chosen only magnifies your words!
Very well done!
SweetLinda
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Begin Again,
This is a very powerful Lune poem! Oh My! It is very intense! Those words certainly do reflect the rage that one would feel in those circumstances! That picture that you have chosen only magnifies your words!
Very well done!
SweetLinda
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
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Linda
Thanks so much for your kind words. i wonder how many people actually turn their heads away even when they see an injustice? Smiles, Carol