POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES
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Comment from Plotosaurus
This is a fine example of the septolet form and a strong contest entry. The photo is too cute. Best of luck with your writing and keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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This is a fine example of the septolet form and a strong contest entry. The photo is too cute. Best of luck with your writing and keep up the good work.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2009
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Ploto
Thanks so much...I just love the little goblins and my grandchildren like me to act afraid. Thanks again Carol
Comment from jester71
That's really cute. I like the words, "feigning fright". I always pretend the trick or treaters scare me terribly and they love to make monster claws at me.
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That's really cute. I like the words, "feigning fright". I always pretend the trick or treaters scare me terribly and they love to make monster claws at me.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Jester
Isn't it fun and listening to them squeal...Thanks so much for the kind review. CArol
Comment from rama devi
Charming entry for the contest, Carol.
Love the rhyming and cadence in this,
Nice pic too!
True to form.
No nits.
Warmly,
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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Charming entry for the contest, Carol.
Love the rhyming and cadence in this,
Nice pic too!
True to form.
No nits.
Warmly,
rd
Comment Written 19-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Rama devi
You mean I actually got it right this time? Wow....Can't recall how often I don't...Thanks for the kind review. Carol
Comment from AnnaLinda
Begin Again,
I just love your Septolet!!! It is adorable! ...and that picture is precious! This part is fantastic! "children squealing in delight." and this too:"eerie sounds,
knocking at my door"
You were very creative and you made this contest entry poem a lot of fun to read!
SweetLinda
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Begin Again,
I just love your Septolet!!! It is adorable! ...and that picture is precious! This part is fantastic! "children squealing in delight." and this too:"eerie sounds,
knocking at my door"
You were very creative and you made this contest entry poem a lot of fun to read!
SweetLinda
Comment Written 19-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Linda
I thought of my grandchildren and how they love to squeal when I act afraid...Thanks for the review. Carol
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My pleasure!
Comment from wilsonian
nOT TOO MUCH TO SAY ABOUT THIS - I LIKED THE CONCENTRATION ON SOUND AND LIGHT. 7 LINES MOST POEMS DONT SCRATCH THE SURFACE BUT I THINK I'LL GO AWAY AND HAVE A GO. ALSO LIKED THE PHOTO!
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nOT TOO MUCH TO SAY ABOUT THIS - I LIKED THE CONCENTRATION ON SOUND AND LIGHT. 7 LINES MOST POEMS DONT SCRATCH THE SURFACE BUT I THINK I'LL GO AWAY AND HAVE A GO. ALSO LIKED THE PHOTO!
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Comment Written 19-Oct-2009
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Wilson
Thanks for stoppping by and reviewing. Appreciate it!
Carol
Comment from adewpearl
I like the two aspects of the picture - the first part seemingly an eerie horror Halloween, and then the added perspective that shows it's really happy trick or treaters on the prowl - nice rhymes too - good luck in the contest, my friend :-) Brooke
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I like the two aspects of the picture - the first part seemingly an eerie horror Halloween, and then the added perspective that shows it's really happy trick or treaters on the prowl - nice rhymes too - good luck in the contest, my friend :-) Brooke
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Comment Written 19-Oct-2009
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Brooke
The joys of being a grandparent...I can remember how they squeal when I act terrified. Thanks for the review. Carol