The Ice Princess
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Setting the Rules"Love, Hate, Conflicts and Fear
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Comment from dmjones
Hi Carol another excellent chapter. I really think the story line is really very good and interesting. It should do well I think.
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Hi Carol another excellent chapter. I really think the story line is really very good and interesting. It should do well I think.
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Donna
There will be several twists and turns. My problem is that I fear having only 10,000 words it crams the story to tightly together. I guess we will see! Thanks for the encouragement.
Carol
Comment from pixiemillie
Oooh, methinks the Ice Princess still has feelings for Max and he seems to think it as well. Excellent descriptives and conversation. I'm going to enjoy reading this. Well done.
between you and me, (between us ?)
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Oooh, methinks the Ice Princess still has feelings for Max and he seems to think it as well. Excellent descriptives and conversation. I'm going to enjoy reading this. Well done.
between you and me, (between us ?)
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Pixie
Thanks for the encouragement. I am glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review. Carol
Comment from c_lucas
Unless you want to change your sexual preferences, you best listen to your lawyer and don't piss her off. This is very well written.
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Unless you want to change your sexual preferences, you best listen to your lawyer and don't piss her off. This is very well written.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2009
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Charlie
Glad you enjoyed the chapter. He is a bit sure of himself, isn't he? But then most men are...oops! I didn't say that. Thanks for the review. Carol
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You're welcome, Carol. The way to a man's heart is through his stomach. Over the years I have found the way to a woman's heart is through sencerity.
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Last word should be sincerity.
Comment from lola29
OOh, Carol, this is sizzling hot. I like Max's stoic behavior considering he's in a heap of trouble. I enjoyed the playful banter between him and Reilly - very subtely sexy. This is going to be a winner1
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OOh, Carol, this is sizzling hot. I like Max's stoic behavior considering he's in a heap of trouble. I enjoyed the playful banter between him and Reilly - very subtely sexy. This is going to be a winner1
Comment Written 08-Oct-2009
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Lola
Thanks for the smile...from you it was worth a million! I wish I had as much confidence as you! Carol
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I have all the confidence in the world in you.
Comment from adewpearl
expression didn't waiver - waver
What a jerk he is - here she is, competent, expert even, professional, trying to save his hide, and he still feels the need to prove he can unsettle her by seducing her - if I needed a damned good lawyer, Johnny Depp could come into the room and all I would care about was that he was going to save my hide!!! :-)
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expression didn't waiver - waver
What a jerk he is - here she is, competent, expert even, professional, trying to save his hide, and he still feels the need to prove he can unsettle her by seducing her - if I needed a damned good lawyer, Johnny Depp could come into the room and all I would care about was that he was going to save my hide!!! :-)
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2009
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Brooke
Guess Max isn't winning any brownie points yet, huh? Luckily our Ice Princess has every thing under control...or at least is doing her level best to keep it that way. Thanks for the review. Carol