The Chinese Water Torture
100 word dash36 total reviews
Comment from Izzysbiggestfans
Very nice. I liked the twist there at the end. I was unaware that a twist could happen in 100 words or less! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2009
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Very nice. I liked the twist there at the end. I was unaware that a twist could happen in 100 words or less! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2009
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Thank you for the positive review.
Comment from adewpearl
the director call should be called
called, "cut should be Cut
You have the conflict, the resolution, the setting, the character and a fun twist ending - pretty darned good for 100 words :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2009
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the director call should be called
called, "cut should be Cut
You have the conflict, the resolution, the setting, the character and a fun twist ending - pretty darned good for 100 words :-) Brooke
Comment Written 13-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2009
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Thanks for the feedback and the positive review.
Comment from Nanny 6
As I read through your story, I was wondering how on earth you were going to pull it off, the last sentence was priceless. Great entry! Good luck, Judy
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As I read through your story, I was wondering how on earth you were going to pull it off, the last sentence was priceless. Great entry! Good luck, Judy
Comment Written 13-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2009
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Thanks for the positive review.
Comment from William Walz
Very well done. You have managed to tell a fairly reasonable story in one paragraph.
One suggestion...
Finally the director calls, "Cut. That's a wrap."
Should be a strong contest entry.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2009
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Very well done. You have managed to tell a fairly reasonable story in one paragraph.
One suggestion...
Finally the director calls, "Cut. That's a wrap."
Should be a strong contest entry.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2009
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Thanks for the positi
Thanks for the feedback and the positive review.
Comment from Kathryn Varuzza
Great!
I think you fulfilled the requirements for the contest.
Interesting, and suspenseful.
I love the ending.
Amazing, and challenging to tell a story in 100 words.
Great job.
Kathryn
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2009
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Great!
I think you fulfilled the requirements for the contest.
Interesting, and suspenseful.
I love the ending.
Amazing, and challenging to tell a story in 100 words.
Great job.
Kathryn
Comment Written 13-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2009
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Thanks for the positive review.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm impressed. It takes me three hundred pages to get a main character, setting, conflict, and resolution all fit in. Very good. You nailed it. Good luck with the contest.
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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2009
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I'm impressed. It takes me three hundred pages to get a main character, setting, conflict, and resolution all fit in. Very good. You nailed it. Good luck with the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2009
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Thanks for the positive review.
