Comment from abishag98

Excellent

Wow! This is very nicely done, Begin Again! I'm thinking there must be a zillion ways to write poetry. This one is called a "nonet poem" and if I hadn't of read the rules, I wouldn't of had a clue.

Again, good work! Take care!

-- Wendyl

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2009

Wendy Neither did I! Read the rules in the contest section and decided to give it a try. Glad you enjoyed it! Carol

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

I found your poem very inspirational. It it well written with with good imagery and descriptive scheme. I wish you the best of luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2009

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Charlie

Thanks so much for the review. Thought I'd give it a try. Something I knew nothing about. Glad you enjoyed it. Carol

reply by c_lucas on 08-Aug-2009

You're welcome, Carol. Charlie

Comment from Sarabran

Excellent

I think you did a good job. I have never written one, but might give it a try. I love how it flows so well. I love the verses they are really beautiful. Good luck in the contest. Sarabran

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2009

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Sara

Thanks so much for the review. I thought it was fun to write. A little scary at first. Glad you enjoyed it. Carol

Comment from DragonSkulls

Excellent

This is a great entry for the nonet contest Begin Again. I'm glad to see some people on this site actually believe in God. It's sad how many don't. You might like my latest post, "If I could live forever." You're welcome to check it out if you like. Great write and good luck in the voting. /Ron

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2009

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Ron Without my faith I never would have survived losing my son and grandson. I needed someone's strength because it wasn't mine. Thanks for the kind review. Glad you enjoyed it. Carol

Comment from Nanette Mary

Excellent

Hullo Begin Again ....

Not only have you fully complied with the requirements for the Nonet format but what you have written is rather special. There will be many readers who are in pain who will find solace in your words.
Thank you for sharing this with us and, as it is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
With love from ..... Nanette Mary.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2009

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Nanette

Thanks so much for the kind review. Especially since this is my first attempt, I hoped I got it right. Thanks again. Carol

Comment from cmdodds

Excellent

Excellent! You followed the rules. You chose a subject and then went from dark to Light, but stayed with your theme. My only question may be the "you and I" was it you and Jesus? I really did like it a lot.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2009

Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem. I am glad you enjoyed it. Carol

Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

Quite a lovely message written in this contest entry...nice first attempt. Great picture to accompany your well-chosen words for such a brief piece. Good luck in the contest. Hugs and smiles, Susanne

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2009

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Susanne Thanks for the kind review. I am so glad you enjoyed the poem. I appreciate your best wishes. Carol

Comment from jackiesmuse

Excellent

Great overall presentation.

I've never written one either. This is very well done, a fine read and it seems to satisfy the rules. Just a question: Did you consider ending with "You and me" instead of You and I.

Nice write. Best wishes in the contest.

:-) Jackie

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2009

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Jackie

Thanks so much for the kind review. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for the suggestion, I'll think about it because I still have time. Thanks again Carol

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

I liked this piece you have done very well a very strong contest entry that is well presented good luck in the contest regards Fuller

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2009

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Fuller

It was my first attempt and I wasn't sure what was expected. Thanks for the kind review. Carol

Comment from Jnetgame

Excellent

Excellent poem. I unfortunately have been at this same place the character in this poem is in, lots of pain and just wanting out. Good luck.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2009

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Jnetgame

Thank you for your kind review. I hope you have moved from that horrible place in time. Carol