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When I dabble at things.....

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Comment from mmichelle97219
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If only my life worked that way. :-D
Its a good entry with a wicked sense of wit and humor. I wish you the best of luck in the competition.
Michelle

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009
    Michelle Thank you for the kind review. I greatly appreciate it. Carol
Comment from Si Brown
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I love it!

A blatent demand for votes, just what a competition like this needs!

Well done!

Si

P.s. Money please....

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009
    Si

    Don't get in a hurry because I haven't won yet...matter of fact voting hasn't even begun. Than of course, you will have to find me...and I can hide pretty good. Thanks for the review. Carol
Comment from DAPologe
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Haha! Hilarious. That was really funny. I didn't get it at first, but then I realized what the prompt was. That's very clever. It should hopefully get people to vote for you.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

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    DAPologe...

    Totally out of my character but if it makes people laugh, that's good. Thanks for the review. Carol
Comment from c_lucas
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Buyin Votes? (LOL) This is very well written with good humor. It has good imagery and descriptive scheme. good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009
    Charlie...

    Have to get some votes somehow...what ever it takes I guess. But then they have to find me so I'll remain in disguise.

    Thanks for the review. It's definitely out of character for me.

    Carol
reply by c_lucas on 23-Jul-2009
    Auction off your best friend's phone number. That should get some money to buy votes. Of course, you'll have to take some time to find another friend. You're welcome, Carol. Charlie
Comment from Donovan
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wow..and on top of all of that I get 8 points and 84 cents...seems like a deal to me...but I bet the line is long, but well worth the wait.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009
    Donovan...Now I am blushing...good thing no one can find this old lady. Thanks for the more than kind review. Put a smile on my face. Thanks again - Carol
Comment from Domino
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Thanks for entering this funny and apropriate write, Carol.

Hey, as you're obviously sincere, would you please ring my local escort agency and get en to send round their best-looker with a coupla million bucks to pay for MY services to HER. hehe.

Good luck n best wishes, Ray xx

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009
    Ray...That's what I like about you..so confident and totally aware of who and what you are....even if others would have a slightly different definition for you. I am so glad you enjoyed my little "piece" while I hide my face and blush.

    Carol
reply by Domino on 23-Jul-2009
    Hey, Carol, don't believe everything I say. Anyway, I gotta go as we're only allowed ten minutes a day on the monastery computer. LOL. xx
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009
    Are you with the monks...corruption exists there too? Amen I'll pray for you...or maybe I should just pray for me...Have a great day. Carol
Comment from dihardest
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I wouldn't dare, but I'm glad you did. This is such an "up yours" statement. Absolutely hilarious. I see the copyright, but I can't promise I won't borrow this for conversational purposes sometime down the road.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009
    dihardest...

    Feel free...I very much doubt that I could ever say it verbally to anyone's face....or mean what I say. Thanks for the review and the kind words. Glad you laughed. Carol
Comment from adewpearl
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well, the thought of having sex with you is not exactly appealing considering my sexual orientation, so exactly how much money are we talking???? LOLOLOL This is extremely funny and fits right in with the spirit of the contest - good luck with your hysterical entry :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009
    Brooke...You scared me when I first started to read...thought OMG what have I gotten myself into. As for the money...well, hope no one can find me...Thanks for the smile and the nice review. Carol
Comment from Alexander E Poet
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Who do I asked? I like the message of love This was and is very insightful. Very well done, and very much enjoyed awesome closing. Inspirational No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can aee.Alexander QQ...

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009
    Alexander...Thanks so much for your kind review. Greatly appreciate it. Carol
Comment from dportwood
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Begin Again,

This short contest entry adheres to the rules in that it encourages a vote by offering anything the voter asks for, no strings attached, just for the asking. That should be a great come-on and I wish you well in the contest.

Duane

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009
    Duane...Glad it's just in jest. Thanks for the review. Appreciate it. Carol