POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES
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Comment from soveryhappy
This is a very special haiku message about family and how it completes you. I totally agree.Love your picture.
I am blessed because I have my family.Some are sweet n some are full of nuts LOL.
Thank you very much for sharing.
Mucho amor,
Wendy
Enjoy the journey...Peace
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2009
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This is a very special haiku message about family and how it completes you. I totally agree.Love your picture.
I am blessed because I have my family.Some are sweet n some are full of nuts LOL.
Thank you very much for sharing.
Mucho amor,
Wendy
Enjoy the journey...Peace
Comment Written 08-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2009
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Wendy...
Thank you for your kind review. My family and their love has helped me make it through many many dark hours. Thanks again - Carol
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You are very welcomed...
Mucho amor,
Wendy
Comment from Somer
Aww, i really liked that. Even though it was short, it still has a lot of meaning to it. It is always good to have Family and god helping us.
Very well written.
Best Wishes
-Somer
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2009
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Aww, i really liked that. Even though it was short, it still has a lot of meaning to it. It is always good to have Family and god helping us.
Very well written.
Best Wishes
-Somer
Comment Written 08-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2009
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Somer..
Thank you for your kind review. Family an dlove has helped me make it through some of my darkest hours. Thanks again Carol
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Your welcome. And yes, same. Family has helped me too.
-Somer
Comment from blondiedots
Your haiku says it all about the fulfillment of the love of family! Love the artwork, design and color! Excellent! Bravo and blessings!
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Your haiku says it all about the fulfillment of the love of family! Love the artwork, design and color! Excellent! Bravo and blessings!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2009
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Blondiedots..
Thank you for your kind words. Love and family are my means of survival in my darkest moments. Thank you so much. Carol
Comment from frelanz
Short and sweet. Just a few words are as powerful as long poems. Great artwork too. This was very nice to read. Nothing needs to be changed on this. It is perfect how it is. Well done :-)
Dawn
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2009
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Short and sweet. Just a few words are as powerful as long poems. Great artwork too. This was very nice to read. Nothing needs to be changed on this. It is perfect how it is. Well done :-)
Dawn
Comment Written 08-Jul-2009
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Dawn... Thank you for your kind words, They are greatly appreciated. Carol
Comment from honeytree
What beautiful art work and the words written here, is what love is within our lives. Feeling loved by someone is just a wonderful feeling, particularly being married to someone for a long time.
Love is good and always will be.
Great writing.
Honeytree.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2009
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What beautiful art work and the words written here, is what love is within our lives. Feeling loved by someone is just a wonderful feeling, particularly being married to someone for a long time.
Love is good and always will be.
Great writing.
Honeytree.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2009
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honeytree...
Love is the best feeling in the word. It can get you through many dark moments. Thanks for the review. Carol
Comment from Helvi2
Hi Begin Again,
There is no greater feeling than being surrounded by your loved ones. There is wonderful warmth withn this poem and you can't help but smile when reading it. Lovely entry for the contest.
Good Luck,
Helvi :o)
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Hi Begin Again,
There is no greater feeling than being surrounded by your loved ones. There is wonderful warmth withn this poem and you can't help but smile when reading it. Lovely entry for the contest.
Good Luck,
Helvi :o)
Comment Written 08-Jul-2009
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Helvi
Thank you for your kind and generous words. They are greatly appreciated. Carol
Comment from Joan E.
Your 5-7-5 is certainly an expression of "bountiful love"--I liked your strong title and the resonating picture and colors you chose. Your life does sound "complete."
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2009
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Your 5-7-5 is certainly an expression of "bountiful love"--I liked your strong title and the resonating picture and colors you chose. Your life does sound "complete."
Comment Written 08-Jul-2009
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Joan E
Thank you for the wonderful review. I greatly appreciate it. Carol
Comment from rama devi
True to contest requirements and well presented with apt artwork to complement your sweet and sentimental theme.
I find the use of "my" to start all three lines weakens this work. Especially in a work of such brevity, every syllable counts. Also, the redundancy of repetition does not suit such succinct styles.
However, since this is a matter of taste of opinion, I will not deduct a star.
Best of luck!
Warm Regards,
rama devi
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2009
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True to contest requirements and well presented with apt artwork to complement your sweet and sentimental theme.
I find the use of "my" to start all three lines weakens this work. Especially in a work of such brevity, every syllable counts. Also, the redundancy of repetition does not suit such succinct styles.
However, since this is a matter of taste of opinion, I will not deduct a star.
Best of luck!
Warm Regards,
rama devi
Comment Written 08-Jul-2009
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Rami devi
I struggled with the my also but couldn't find anything that actually worked to put in its place. I appreciate you comments. Carol
Comment from Robbi Kayser-Stange
What a pleasant piece of work. The presentation of picture and poem work well together. I like the flow of the piece too, not a common feeling when I read most of the Haiku I have read. Nicely done. A good read. Robbi
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What a pleasant piece of work. The presentation of picture and poem work well together. I like the flow of the piece too, not a common feeling when I read most of the Haiku I have read. Nicely done. A good read. Robbi
Comment Written 08-Jul-2009
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Robbi
Thank for reading my poem and for the awesome review. I great appreciate your kind words. Carol
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And I appreciated your poem. Robbi
Comment from S.Yocom
This is a fine haiku, Carol. Your syllable counts are perfect, and your message telling of the joy a loving family brings is beautiful.
Sally
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This is a fine haiku, Carol. Your syllable counts are perfect, and your message telling of the joy a loving family brings is beautiful.
Sally
Comment Written 08-Jul-2009
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Sally
Thank you for your kind review. I greatly appreciate it. Carol