CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from NightWriter
"Inked" is a fun to read poem about the tramp stamp. Written with perfect rhythm and rhyming, and reads smooth throughout. Well done as always.
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"Inked" is a fun to read poem about the tramp stamp. Written with perfect rhythm and rhyming, and reads smooth throughout. Well done as always.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2009
Comment from findingmyroom
Oh my God this is hysterical. Love the art, and the idea that those wishing for ink need psychiatric help! (Never understood the draw myself.) Very cute & fun.
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Oh my God this is hysterical. Love the art, and the idea that those wishing for ink need psychiatric help! (Never understood the draw myself.) Very cute & fun.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2009
Comment from Wendyanne
Lol is that what tattoos are called 'tramp stamps'? I enjoyed this very funny piece of jaunty poetry but I'll give the tattoo a miss lol
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Lol is that what tattoos are called 'tramp stamps'? I enjoyed this very funny piece of jaunty poetry but I'll give the tattoo a miss lol
Comment Written 01-Apr-2009
Comment from skye
5 stars for writing, but 1 star for making these seem admirable. Oh, how I hate to see beautiful people colored up with these horrific and ugly creations.]
Your poem is so well written, I read it all through, but honestly, I must be soooooo old.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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5 stars for writing, but 1 star for making these seem admirable. Oh, how I hate to see beautiful people colored up with these horrific and ugly creations.]
Your poem is so well written, I read it all through, but honestly, I must be soooooo old.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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The WORST ones now are the beautiful young girls getting their ENTIRE arms tatooed. The WHOLE thing from shoulder on down! Ugly as hell, in my book. A one star for making them seem admirable...now THAT's cool! LOL!! Thanks so much for your great review, Skye. Sue :-))
Comment from joan marie
You didn't seem the type even to get a butterfly where no one can see it. I know it is an art form and have been amazed by some of it. But not on my body. Great write. joan marie
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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You didn't seem the type even to get a butterfly where no one can see it. I know it is an art form and have been amazed by some of it. But not on my body. Great write. joan marie
Comment Written 01-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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No, I don't really have a tramp stamp; not even a tiny tat. Just had a bit of fun! Saw the image first, then wrote about it. Thanks much for your great review! Sue :-))
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Some people you just know that isn't their thing. The man who tried to kill me had a lot of tatoos and now unfortunately that's it what I associate them with. I know it isn't always that way. People must be free to express themselves in their unique way. jm
Comment from prodigal
This is a fun little poem. :) It made me laugh. YOu got a tramp stamp. That is too funny. On a technical level, this poem is very well written. It rhymes easy and flows well. Great job- Sam
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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This is a fun little poem. :) It made me laugh. YOu got a tramp stamp. That is too funny. On a technical level, this poem is very well written. It rhymes easy and flows well. Great job- Sam
Comment Written 01-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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Hi Sam, glad you got a laugh. I saw the image and just had to write about it. And thank you for your review. Sue :-)
Comment from Judian James
I loved the rhyme pattern with this one Sue! Aren't tats all the rage now? I saw one this past weekend that blew me away - a young kid had the fingers of his right-hand tattooed with seriously heavy swear words!!! well done
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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I loved the rhyme pattern with this one Sue! Aren't tats all the rage now? I saw one this past weekend that blew me away - a young kid had the fingers of his right-hand tattooed with seriously heavy swear words!!! well done
Comment Written 01-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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Jude, glad you liked that rhyme pattern. It made it a bit o' fun. I'm too chicken to even get a teeny tiny tat! Thanks for your review. Sue
Comment from Jazh
Hehhehe I enjoyed this one, Sue, being a 'tattooed lady' myself - at my age, I've just had a large boa constrictor finished around my calf and foot. "Tramp stamp" - great rhyme but I haven't heard it before. This is a great, lighthearted poem. Cheers. :)
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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Hehhehe I enjoyed this one, Sue, being a 'tattooed lady' myself - at my age, I've just had a large boa constrictor finished around my calf and foot. "Tramp stamp" - great rhyme but I haven't heard it before. This is a great, lighthearted poem. Cheers. :)
Comment Written 01-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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Now you can spread the term "tramp stamp" around in Oz. Ha! I'm too afraid to even get the tiniest of a ink. Thanks for your review. Sue :-))
Comment from fastdigits
Your choice of photographic splendor
like the carnival barker with the hook
pulling the customers in.
Now once within your clutches, the
words of laughter spill over the page
from the very first stanza that then
culminates with a throaty laugh at
the final act.
Well done and great start for a day
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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Your choice of photographic splendor
like the carnival barker with the hook
pulling the customers in.
Now once within your clutches, the
words of laughter spill over the page
from the very first stanza that then
culminates with a throaty laugh at
the final act.
Well done and great start for a day
Comment Written 01-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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So, I didn't fool you! Loved your "carnival barker"! HA!! Glad you got a good laugh at this one! And thanks for your fun review. Sue :-))
Comment from Perp Ihebom
Okay just for fun it is. I think it was quite entertaining as i enjoyed the play on words. The rhymes are also very nice. Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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Okay just for fun it is. I think it was quite entertaining as i enjoyed the play on words. The rhymes are also very nice. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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Hi Perp, really glad you enjoyed this one. Thanks much for your review! Sue :-))