CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from adewpearl
like sister's do drop the apostrophe
Great artwork to choose!! This is a delightful gift for your sister - your rhyming couplets have nice cadence and express such heartfelt appreciation - there is no "it depends." I like that! A sweet poem, Sue. Brooke
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2009
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like sister's do drop the apostrophe
Great artwork to choose!! This is a delightful gift for your sister - your rhyming couplets have nice cadence and express such heartfelt appreciation - there is no "it depends." I like that! A sweet poem, Sue. Brooke
Comment Written 08-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2009
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Brooke, WHAT is the matter with me? I was always a #1 stickler for spelling and apostrophes, etc. And now, I hang my head in shame. Thank goodness you're my "back-stop"! HA! Thanks for your very kind review. Sue :-)
Comment from BethShelby
This is beautiful poem telling your sister how much you care about her. You should sell this peom to a greeting card company like Hallmark. You could say my dearest sis instead of Deb. I love the way you have constructed the lines and the way you have displayed it.
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This is beautiful poem telling your sister how much you care about her. You should sell this peom to a greeting card company like Hallmark. You could say my dearest sis instead of Deb. I love the way you have constructed the lines and the way you have displayed it.
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2009
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It does sound "Hallmark-ish", doesn't it. :-)) Thanks so much for your lovely review and compliments. With regards, Sue
Comment from rhymelord
Nice one, Sue.
No nits (Damn, I'm getting hungry) and a nicely framed message of love to your sister. A pleasure to read as always.
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Nice one, Sue.
No nits (Damn, I'm getting hungry) and a nicely framed message of love to your sister. A pleasure to read as always.
Regards
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2009
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Ha! You crack me up, Mr. Hyena! The Lioness Roars!! LOL! Thanks so much for your very kind (and hilarious) review! Sue :-))