The Minute Poem
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Comment from raimie
Oooh, that photo stops my breath. I think I can see the cold air in front of my face! What a beautiful piece of writing an exquisite example of description at it's finest. Between this photo and your words i want to run through this snow.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Oooh, that photo stops my breath. I think I can see the cold air in front of my face! What a beautiful piece of writing an exquisite example of description at it's finest. Between this photo and your words i want to run through this snow.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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I'm so happy you enjoyed this poem - how about I send you my snow and you can run through it while I enjoy the grass! LOL
Thank you so much for your most generous review, Brooke :-)
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Lol, that will work! Here in Texas, we only get sleet. A messy ice mix. aah haven't had a real snow in like 10 yrs :(
Comment from Adri7enne
Beautiful! I've seen it. Your words reminded me that yes, this is what I see. But you capture it so well in so few words. God's gallery, indeed. Priceless art. Loved it.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Beautiful! I've seen it. Your words reminded me that yes, this is what I see. But you capture it so well in so few words. God's gallery, indeed. Priceless art. Loved it.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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I am so pleased you like this one so much - thank you for your most generous rating - and your comments are always so welcome and kind!! Brooke
Comment from gerry26
I am also snowed in. Your last line said it all Gods gallery. Your words are full of wonder and joy at the perfect way snow paints a picture.
gerry
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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I am also snowed in. Your last line said it all Gods gallery. Your words are full of wonder and joy at the perfect way snow paints a picture.
gerry
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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gerry, thank you for your thoughtful and kind comments, Brooke :-)
Comment from SunlitWhisper
Oh I'm so ready for Spring. Just looking at this freezes me. LOL Loved your poem and it's vivid descriptions and the image it put in my mind. Loved reading this.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Oh I'm so ready for Spring. Just looking at this freezes me. LOL Loved your poem and it's vivid descriptions and the image it put in my mind. Loved reading this.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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I'm so ready for spring too!!! Thanks, Brooke :-)
Comment from mildredmolanki
Lucky you enjoying all that pretty snow. I enjoyed your poem, and it's delightful imagery. I especially liked how you end the poem. Kind regards, MM
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Lucky you enjoying all that pretty snow. I enjoyed your poem, and it's delightful imagery. I especially liked how you end the poem. Kind regards, MM
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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I'm not actually enjoying it at all, just trying to talk myself into being positive about it! LOL Thanks so much, Brooke :-)
Comment from Just2Write
Snow is so beautiful, and it has the magic power to turn the most dismal scenes into ones of sparkling beauty. It is hard to remain angry with the snowman for long, even when traffic is snarled, or we have to dig out. You paint a wonderful picutre in your poem. For me, you saved the best for last - my favourite lines were:
admission free,
God's gallery.
Yeah.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Snow is so beautiful, and it has the magic power to turn the most dismal scenes into ones of sparkling beauty. It is hard to remain angry with the snowman for long, even when traffic is snarled, or we have to dig out. You paint a wonderful picutre in your poem. For me, you saved the best for last - my favourite lines were:
admission free,
God's gallery.
Yeah.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Rose, thank you - I had those lines before I had half the lines in the middle - glad you like them!! Brooke :-)
Comment from sara-beth
This is lovely, and it reminds me that there is always something to do for free. Like go for a walk! Outside! Imagine that.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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This is lovely, and it reminds me that there is always something to do for free. Like go for a walk! Outside! Imagine that.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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You're right - life does provide free entertainment - my daughter and I like going to the mall and people watching while we window shop - just noticing what other folks wear can be a laugh a minute! LOL Thanks, Brooke :-)
Comment from Penpal
This poem simply flowed amazingly with its descriptive beautiful visuals and I enjoyed it a great deal. Exceptional work.
Oh, how that beautiful white stuff can take your breath away, even if it is soooooo cold.
Thanks for sharing this great piece.
Pen
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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This poem simply flowed amazingly with its descriptive beautiful visuals and I enjoyed it a great deal. Exceptional work.
Oh, how that beautiful white stuff can take your breath away, even if it is soooooo cold.
Thanks for sharing this great piece.
Pen
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Pen, thank you so much for this wonderful response and most generous review - I truly appreciate it. Brooke :-)
Comment from Fleedleflump
Snow: beautiful to look at, and a right royal pain in the arse to have to navigate :-). I particularly like "artwork formed from winter's storm" in this one. Some lovely imagery, and the steady, assured hand that I've come to expect.
Mike
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Snow: beautiful to look at, and a right royal pain in the arse to have to navigate :-). I particularly like "artwork formed from winter's storm" in this one. Some lovely imagery, and the steady, assured hand that I've come to expect.
Mike
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Mike, thank you for another wonderful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Good morning again. I love the beauty of a new snow fall and spent ost of yesterday driving around and taking photos of our snow. I enjoyed you poem and good luck to you. An inspirational read, LOyd
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Good morning again. I love the beauty of a new snow fall and spent ost of yesterday driving around and taking photos of our snow. I enjoyed you poem and good luck to you. An inspirational read, LOyd
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Loyd, my photographer husband and I used to take such drives - thank you for that little moment of nostalgia :-) And thank you for your kind review, Brooke
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That's great glad to help out, loyd