Comment from Domino

Excellent

Hi, Sue.
more troubled thoughts on a lonely predicament and uncertain future. Just ta stick me nose in, how about second line ending 'utility' and last line 'futility'?. Four silly bells, extra rhyme and resigned drama. Geeeez! I'm good! LMAO
Great as it is. Good luck and best wishes, Ray xx

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2009

Comment from Rain Chapman

Excellent

I liked this. Its amazing how much information can be put across in so few syllables and this is such a wonderful message. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2009

Comment from MJMuraco

Excellent

Your poem is awesome and the photo of the open door goes perfectly with the content of your poem. It was short and simple but gets the message across. Nice job.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2009

Comment from jeslaf

Excellent

Keep on lookin'! This starts sad and ends hopeful...a whole beginning/middle/end in one short little form is a difficult feat, but you've pulled it off here. :)

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2009

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2009

Love being challenged by these short, restrictive forms. Thanks so much for your very kind compliments and review. Always, Sue :-))

Comment from jaeladarling

Excellent

That's how you open those locked doors - find the key! This is a great poem on both being open to opportunity and finding it yourself. Great style and flow. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2009

Comment from WRITER1

Excellent

I liked this poem although short, I see where it is going. There are always new things when one chapter of our lives end and another door opens.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2009

Comment from Ms. Gray

Excellent

The message in your poem is so true and we need to be reminded to look for other options. I liked your use of artwork to reinforce your message.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2009

Comment from NightWriter

Excellent

"Opportunities" is a well written, perfectly stated naani poem. There is truth in the saying "Persistence prevails when all else fails". :)

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2009

Comment from The Rivaling Mimic

Excellent

Hello

This was a great piece of poetry. Short yet very effective. I found the theme to work out and I have noticed no room for improvemnt.

The Rivaling Mimic

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2009

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2009

Hi Mimic, thanks very much for your very kind review. I do like the challenges of these short and strict poetic formats sometimes. With regards, Sue

Comment from Roisin

Excellent

This is a lovely naani, Sue, with a clever use of the opening of the door to signify perseverence. Your overall presentation is great and the picture just perfect. Good luck in the contest.

Warm regards.

Roisin

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2009