A Leaf on the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Fear"Autobiography of abuse
33 total reviews
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
What a traumatic, horrifying
experince for a young girl,
for anyone, if it comes to that.
A good descriptive piece of
writing - well presented and
easy to follow.
Well penned, my friend.
Margaret.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2009
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What a traumatic, horrifying
experince for a young girl,
for anyone, if it comes to that.
A good descriptive piece of
writing - well presented and
easy to follow.
Well penned, my friend.
Margaret.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2009
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Thank you for your kind words. Difficult subjet but important to undersand the child's view. Again, thank you for your coments. I value them all.
Comment from jojosug
I hardly know what to write except that I know what you went through and how it felt. Writing it however painful does exorcise the demons and I understand your need to do this. Your bravery is exceptional and I salute you from the bottom of my heart. I read your profile and am so glad you have not only survived, but thrived and long may you continue to do so. You are not alone in your pain and your strength, of which you have so much.
Your writing is also beautiful and you have much talent.
Jo
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2009
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I hardly know what to write except that I know what you went through and how it felt. Writing it however painful does exorcise the demons and I understand your need to do this. Your bravery is exceptional and I salute you from the bottom of my heart. I read your profile and am so glad you have not only survived, but thrived and long may you continue to do so. You are not alone in your pain and your strength, of which you have so much.
Your writing is also beautiful and you have much talent.
Jo
Comment Written 06-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2009
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Thank you very much for your kind words. While it is a difficult subject to both write and read, I feel deeply it is also an important one.
Comment from Firefly54
A difficult chapter to review.. you grasp the readers attention and hold it effortlessly, even though we can guess what is coming. Hard to write... hard to read... Hard to imagine that a mother doesn't guess, but I suppose we sometimes can't see or imagine the worst in those we love
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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2009
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A difficult chapter to review.. you grasp the readers attention and hold it effortlessly, even though we can guess what is coming. Hard to write... hard to read... Hard to imagine that a mother doesn't guess, but I suppose we sometimes can't see or imagine the worst in those we love
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2009
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Thank you. I appreciate your comments. You touch the main point of my book...my mother. Again, thank you for you kind words.