What If?
Reflecting on emotional pain32 total reviews
Comment from yachtworknz
Ouch- I think I wrote an ouch on the last one I reviewed also. Yes, ouch. I'm glad your writing to get this out. The poem tells a story for sure.
Ouch.
Scott
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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2008
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Ouch- I think I wrote an ouch on the last one I reviewed also. Yes, ouch. I'm glad your writing to get this out. The poem tells a story for sure.
Ouch.
Scott
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2008
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review! :-)
Hugs,
Jani
PS LOL Ouches away!
Comment from Teri7
Jan, This is a very sad poem but it shows what a great person you are to stand up to the past and keep on living. Great wording and art work. Love, Teri
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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2008
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Jan, This is a very sad poem but it shows what a great person you are to stand up to the past and keep on living. Great wording and art work. Love, Teri
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2008
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review! :-)
Hugs,
Jani